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#76 2010-02-01 15:20:50

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

Always leave 'em wanting more....  3dbig_smile

Glad you're enjoying the story.
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#77 2010-02-02 11:13:16

Mikal
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Re: Justice Seven

That's the problem. I'm NOT enjoying the story because it's not continuing on yet! I want to learn how they handle the little issue of lots of automatic weapons surrounding what they're after... Ahh well..we shall see.

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#78 2010-03-22 22:50:05

elthryn
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Re: Justice Seven

I am also wondering when you will continue the story. I have visited the many times since I read chapter 12, and I haven't even seen a PRM.

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#79 2010-03-22 23:07:18

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

And I'm wondering when people will learn that badgering me for more chapters isn't likely to speed up my production rate any.

Real Life (TM) has been a rather large pain lately, especially financially.  I don't write very well when I'm stressed out.  You want to increase the likelihood of me writing something?  Make a donation.

Or you could have a little patience, like all the other people here.

Eric Storm


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#80 2010-05-22 07:30:59

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

J7-13 is a dual-crossover chapter with Paladin.  What I mean by that is that both stories are, for one chapter, telling the same story, from different points of view.  Paladin 5 and J7-13 talk about the same case, in which Paladin enlists the assistance of the MDSA.

If you are reading both Paladin and Justice Seven, you should probably read Paladin 5 before reading J7-13.  While all the information you absolutely need is found within J7 alone, the case that J7-13 talks about starts in Paladin 5.

If you're not reading Paladin, don't worry about it:  I've made sure that there is enough explanation to allow you to understand everything without having to read a new story.

Enjoy,
Eric Storm


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#81 2010-05-28 06:06:47

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Re: Justice Seven

3dbig_smile love it

(posted from Episode 9: Casework)


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#82 2010-05-29 08:32:07

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woot! awesome. btw I totally would have figured that Paul, what with the way you've portrayed his persona, would have somehow betrayed the MDSA. Gone rogue and done damage to everyone. But I must completely surrender my predictions because this chapter just ate through my ideas like acid on, well, pretty much anything. lol. I love the intrigue of government interaction, at least the government doesn't seems like they are all completely putz's, as it felt like to me in CAMP series. (p.s. there is no possible way to measure your skills at writing awesome stories[like on a scale of 1-100, etc.] because no one has yet been able to create a large enough scale lol)

(posted from Episode 13: Enter the Paladin)


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#83 2010-05-29 09:50:39

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

Glad you're enjoying the story.  I think you'll find Chapter 14 fun... when I get it written.  3dsmile  We'll get to see Paul again for a couple chapters, and things will just get... interesting.  3dwink

Who, me?  Teasing the readers?  Now would I do a thing like that?  3dangel

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#84 2010-05-29 11:58:15

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Re: Justice Seven

oops, accidentally reposted same message lol.

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#85 2010-05-29 12:04:08

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Re: Justice Seven

Eric Storm wrote:

Glad you're enjoying the story.  I think you'll find Chapter 14 fun... when I get it written.  3dsmile  We'll get to see Paul again for a couple chapters, and things will just get... interesting.  3dwink

Who, me?  Teasing the readers?  Now would I do a thing like that?  3dangel

Eric Storm

lol, np. I am patient enough to wait (and donate) in the mean-time. Meanwhile, I suppose I shall catch up on some fav TV episodes.

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#86 2010-07-11 01:04:43

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Re: Justice Seven

Great Story As usual

(posted from Episode 13: Enter the Paladin)

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#87 2011-08-04 22:30:22

Symbioos
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Registered: 2010-07-14
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Re: Justice Seven

Grate story with a lot of twists and turns... Keep them coming please 3dsmile

(posted from Chapter 17: The Case of the Broadmoor Bandits)

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#88 2011-08-05 07:57:46

SilentSadist
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Re: Justice Seven

<3 super awesome character and plot development!

(posted from Chapter 17: The Case of the Broadmoor Bandits)


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#89 2011-08-05 17:34:25

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

Thanks.  Glad you liked it.

Eric Storm


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#90 2011-09-18 18:32:36

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Re: Justice Seven

new chapter !
does a dance of joy 3dsmile


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#91 2011-09-23 04:17:27

SilentSadist
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Re: Justice Seven

ZOMG I freaking love it! I hope this isn't the ending. If this is an ending to Justice Seven, perfect ending. Though I would love love love love love it if you found it in your heart and in your mind to create a new series that develops from this one. A sequel, one that goes on to tell the stories/adventures/missions of STRAIN and what's left of our Justice Seven team. plzzz? 3dsmile

(posted from Episode 20: Conclusions)


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#92 2011-09-23 05:16:25

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

Glad you enjoyed the story.

This IS the final chapter of Justice Seven.  Whether or not any stories develop concerning STRAIN and the future of the team is up in the air.  I have a lot of stuff to finish up right now.

Perhaps I may continue by way of a set of short stories, rather than a novel.  We'll just have to see.

Eric Storm


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#93 2011-09-23 05:57:24

SilentSadist
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Re: Justice Seven

It's ok. I'm more than happy and satisfied with reading anything else you produce. It's just that your writing is so damn good, even with a perfect ending I still want more haha.


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#94 2011-09-24 04:19:19

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Re: Justice Seven

OOoooo a spin-off, nice. While I would really like to know what happened in the last 5 years, I think I can safely say that I'm content with what I've read.

Thanks for a great story Eric, I hope this new one takes off in your head and reaches paper also.

(posted from Episode 20: Conclusions)

Edit: I guess I should have read the other comments first lol, now I know that this is the end of Justice Seven and what you may or may not do in the future with STRAIN.

(and I meant reaches the screen and not paper)

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#95 2011-09-26 08:11:52

Elessar
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Registered: 2009-10-28
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Re: Justice Seven

The entire story over all is freaking awesome. I disagree with some of the events and people and such, but cant like everything. My only question is what does STRAIN stand for? Sorry for any errors, this was read and typed on my phone. Which by the way, the mobile easy page works great.

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#96 2011-10-15 14:05:58

Drowsy
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Registered: 2011-10-09
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Re: Justice Seven

Wow, cool story... one thing though one question, why is it only Paul that has a problem with Luke looking inside his head and non of the others seem to mind?

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#97 2011-10-15 18:52:57

Eric Storm
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Re: Justice Seven

Paul is the one he did it to most often.  But really, do you complain loudly about something you 1) cannot prevent and 2) cannot even tell is happening?  In other instances where Luke was obvious about looking into someone's head, either the victim DID complain, or there was a more immediate issue to be dealt with, so that complaint was subverted by events.

Elessar: Somehow I don't remember ever seeing your post.  Kind of a spoiler, I guess, but STRAIN stands for "Special Tactical Response And Investigations Network".  Sorry I didn't say anything earlier.

Eric Storm


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#98 2011-12-09 05:03:05

daves.not.here
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Re: Justice Seven

Wow!  Great story so far!  I started reading "Justice Seven" way back when on EWP.  Back then it was only up to episode 8!

I just read "Episode 15" and this is a great story so far!  I wonder if Loki is going to turn bad with all the nasty crap he's pulling.

Keep up the great work,
Dave

(posted from Episode 15: Loki)

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#99 2012-01-22 08:05:47

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Re: Justice Seven

it's been awile ut it nice to see that this piece finnished.  Good Job Eric well done as usual. 3dbig_smile

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#100 2012-01-26 13:22:23

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Registered: 2008-07-17
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Re: Justice Seven

Eagerly awaiting the next series

(posted from Episode 20: Conclusions)


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