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Gloria is not hopeful so she is not trying very best to get Evan attention,or to let him see her as a girl not a kid. may be if she catches a glimpse of Daena and Evan kissing or Candy/Evan,she will know that Evan can give in into incest and she will try harder and will raise her hopes up
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Blueberries are also effective in altering the flavor, consistency, and even the look of male ejaculate (my SO prefers the alteration by blueberries to the one by pineapple).
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If you already read chapter 7 of this story, before 6/1/16, then why didn't you tell me there was a chunk of the story missing? I'm sorry if it seemed like the story jumped from Deana'a bedroom to Evan saying something at the race track. It did, because somehow five pages got chopped out of the story. It's been fixed. Sorry.
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You have a very good eye for detail, and the family dynamics and interactions are quite realistic. Your description of Evan's bathroom jerk off session is excellent.
(posted from Chapter 1: The Pantie Fetish)
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Wow very nicely written.i am hapy to see progrss with Deana.She is the One for him but the fear they feel is also so real.Gloria is still left out,i hope she will get her chance.
very well written and i love the teasing
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Hey bud, you still doing well and all?
And any update on when the next one will be out?
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Just a friendly reminder:
It's rude to ask an author when they're going to post something again. It implies they're holding things back from you on purpose. The vast majority of Internet authors would be forced to answer this question, "Whenever I manage to get it finished."
Eric Storm
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Thanks, Eric, you should know.
As far as an update, I wish I could have gotten this ready faster, but shit happens, and more than normal lately, but be of good cheer, I'm posting chapter 10 now!
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You had mentioned you may bring some of your other stories over from XNXX. I was wondering (hoping) if we might hear something about Joe, Jasmin, Susan. I really liked that series and was left hanging by the ending.
Keep up the good work on Potential.
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drmetz13, it's definitely on my todo list, but you see how long it is taking me to get these chapters of potential up. I do have to put chapter one and three up soon, though, because sexstories has finally noticed that they break their many censorship rules. Some do gooder probably reported me. It's awesome that Wolfpub is hear for us!
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I am just now singing in to this sight to read more of your writings. So far they are all great. Keep up the good work..
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Great chapter can what for the next one. Keep up the awesome writing and great storyline.
(posted from Chapter 10: Sweet Almond Massage)
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Great story so far. Semi patiently waiting for the next chapter. Hoping to see the twins finally get together.
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Once again you created another Peace to the great puzzle that you're putting together your stories I have always been very good and I've been reading since he first Neighbors and I always enjoy reading your stories so please keep them coming you always got a fan in me
(posted from Chapter 12: What is Plan B?)
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Well here's my first post. Love the story not sure why other websites wouldn't let you post chapter 6? However I really hope your working on future chapters.
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I took a short break to write a story for a contest, then my parents visited, but they're gone, so I can get back to work.
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Heeey. I started a new job this week AND there's a new chapter. Yay.
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Hello, sorry for the extended delay on chapter 13, you know how life can be. Make sure you visit sexstories and leave comments mentioning how much faster unedited chapters get to Wolfpub. Vote too, so the story stays where the most people can find out about this site. I can't mention it in the story or they will ban me from the site.
Hope you find this chapter enjoyable.
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This is a great story!
(posted from Chapter 13: 1666 Beaver Dam Road)
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devonglen wrote:
This is a great story!
(posted from Chapter 13: 1666 Beaver Dam Road)
Thank you.
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I see the potential. All those secrets, the plotting, the drama...no idea what you are building up to, but it looks promising. The way you are building this twisted story reminds me of these over the top soap operas. I don't yet know, if I consider this a good thing. Hopefully you do not plan to go on for 1000 chapters, opening convoluted story lines without ever closing any.
Now I need to continue reading.
(posted from Chapter 7: Summer Lawn Job)
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Sniper wrote:
Hopefully you do not plan to go on for 1000 chapters, opening convoluted story lines without ever closing any.
Now I need to continue reading.
(posted from Chapter 7: Summer Lawn Job)
Definitely not. Glad you're enjoying it. I'll get busy now that the holidays are over.
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I really like the personality of Evan, he is trying his best to hold himself. But it seems like all his surroundings are playing games with his brain. I am still hoping that Evan could talk to Deana a little more openly. The chapter ended hanging on a cliff, I am already hating his father, hope Evan could save Deana and his father goes for a life time imprisonment !!!
Loved the story till now, especially the details of relations and bonding between different characters. Hope to hear you soon
(posted from Chapter 14: Full Circle)
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i can't wait to read more. this is one of my fave stories on the site. it is up there in rnking, in my eyes atleast, alongside pretty much the collective works of mr storm himself.
don't be discouraged by anyone bistander. you are creating a great story that has me drooling for more.
can barely wait for next chapter! ^_^
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Thank you very much. Your wait has come to an end. I'm about to upload the next chapter. Please, keep the positive comments coming. Somedays they are the only motivation I have.
Mr. Storm has given me a great deal of assistance with the first half of this story. My punctuation is still lacking, but not because he didn't try.
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