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#1 2022-04-01 00:03:51
Tales of the Summoned: Book Two: Seiji
Tales of the Summoned: Book Two: Seiji
A second story line from Tales of the Summoned
A modern Samurai in a medieval world
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#2 2022-04-04 08:48:03
- Elessar
- Completely Blotto
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Re: Tales of the Summoned: Book Two: Seiji
The story itself was good, few tiny problems with not finishing a word, like ‘he’ when it was supposed to be a ‘her’ situation. Only actual thing I am concerned about… is starting a second book or POV of the world WAY before finishing the original? Unless that was a sort of finish.
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#3 2022-04-04 12:36:40
- Pleidius
- Inebriated
- From: Minnesota
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Re: Tales of the Summoned: Book Two: Seiji
I'm far from the best at keyboard entry. Extra letters from my fat fingered typing are easy to spot and correct.
Missing letters, not so much, especially when the shorter words are still properly spelled words.
At the moment, I plan for some stories to converge. There my be standalone stories as well
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