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#1 2011-04-01 06:58:35
In-Patient Therapy
In-Patient Therapy
When a man enters the hospital for a mysterious illness, he ends up helping his doctor as much as she helps him.
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#2 2011-04-01 09:00:05
- Cenobite829
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Re: In-Patient Therapy
Great little story and the ending was outstanding. Keep up the good work.
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#3 2011-04-01 18:25:00
- Eric Storm
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Re: In-Patient Therapy
Thanks. Glad you liked it.
Eric Storm
Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM.
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#4 2012-05-10 06:39:37
- Kitsune
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Great story. I liked the ending and i for one had to laugh when the nurse fixed the machine
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#5 2022-06-12 22:53:06
- daves.not.here
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Re: In-Patient Therapy
Great story! I enjoyed reading it.
Have you thought about a sequel? I could see problems occurring with her brother or her parents...
Thanks,
Dave
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#6 2022-06-13 00:08:39
- Eric Storm
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Re: In-Patient Therapy
I'm glad you enjoyed it. No, I have never considered a sequel. And, looking at the number of comments on this thread, I think you're pretty much the only person who ever has.
While I would certainly be willing to write another story with these characters, if one occurred to me... nothing occurs to me at the moment.
(Feel free to offer up an idea if you happen to have one. Not saying I'll write it, but who knows?)
Eric Storm
Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM.
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