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#1 2022-09-20 01:10:15

Bridget
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(Book 2) Life in San Diego

(Book 2) Life in San Diego

This is the direct continuation of the Saving Sister Sue series.  It will depict the lives of Dan Sue and friends after leaving Virginia for San Diego.  I hope everyone continues to enjoy this story.  In this book I will not be devoting a chapter to each day.  Please let me know what you think by commenting and rating this next book.
Thank you
Sincerely,
Snake_eater1960


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#2 2022-09-20 12:48:57

Zmaybe
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

nicely done, thank you

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#3 2022-09-20 22:35:15

Eric Storm
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

Might want to fix the title, since the name of the city is not "Sandiego", but "San Diego"...

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#4 2022-09-21 17:26:06

Snake_eater1960
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

Thanks Eric!
Fixed

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#5 2022-11-01 14:07:06

Zmaybe
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

Thank you for another fun to read chapter.  Hope to see more soon.

(posted from Chapter 4 (Good News, Parks, and Recreation))

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#6 2022-11-02 14:28:12

SS54
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

I usually do not post here because my spelling sucks. My skills at writing are very poor but the first book was great. This one seems to be right in it's foot steps. Please keep it up. This story is GREAT!!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#7 2022-11-08 03:10:08

Snake_eater1960
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

SS54 wrote:

I usually do not post here because my spelling sucks. My skills at writing are very poor but the first book was great. This one seems to be right in it's foot steps. Please keep it up. This story is GREAT!!

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Thank you for taking the time and putting forth the effort to comment.  I really appreciate the vote of confidence and it keeps me wanting to continue this story for a while more.

Sincerely,
Snake_eater1960

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#8 2022-12-02 00:13:30

Mikenc67
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Re: (Book 2) Life in San Diego

Now that there is a regular daily routine on weekdays, (work, school), maybe gloss over those times and focus instead on new events, activities.

I am otherwise hooked on this storyline.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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