I am loving this entire saga. I have some story line thoughts and wonder when you will come up with the same ideas. The stories are easy to read and keep enough going to hold us. Keep up the good work! Thanks!

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If you have ideas for a story, don't wait for the author to come up with them on their own.  People don't think the same way, and so your ideas may never occur to them.  If you like your ideas, then give them to the author, and let them decide whether they like your ideas better than their own.  I couldn't even begin to tell you how many of my readers have had their ideas incorporated into my stories.  But if we, as authors, never hear your ideas, then there's no way for us to include them.

Eric Storm

bigro wrote:

I am loving this entire saga. I have some story line thoughts and wonder when you will come up with the same ideas. The stories are easy to read and keep enough going to hold us. Keep up the good work! Thanks!

First;  Let me thank you for taking the time to post a message they really do help to keep me motivated.

Second;  As Eric said in his post if you have ideas about where to go with story please feel free to let me know and if I can I will incorporate them into the story.  If you don't feel comfortable posting them here you can email them to me at Snake_Eater1960@yahoo.com   

I am happy you are enjoying the story and I sincerely hope to be able to keep it up for many more chapters.

Sincerely,
Snake_eater1960

This story gets better with every chapter can not wait for the next one.

Thank you for your support Glockman22.  It is greatly appreciated.

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I luv this story can’t stop reading it

(posted from Chapter 4 (Good News, Parks, and Recreation))

I hope you are going to continue this Saga. I am totally invested now. Gotta read more.

(posted from Chapter 1 (Goodbye Dam Neck Hello San Diego))

Thank You Johnnycat69 and Dadrepus!  I'm happy to hear you are enjoying these stories. 

Dadrepus I am currently editing chapter 10 and working on Chapter 11 of Book2.  I plan on continuing this series through to completion and comments like these help to keep me motivated to keep writing.

Thanks to both of you again.
Snake_eater1960

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UH, WHAT HAPPENED TO CHAPTER 13 of Book 2?  We went from 12 to 14 and some conversations talk about things 'out of the blue', like a BONANZA twin engine.

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Thank you for pointing that out I have now posted Chapter 13 and apologize for the mistake.  I'm not sure how to fix the order of how they are posted though.  Eric if you can do anything to fix the order please do so.

Snake_eater 1960

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The order is now fixed.  Thank you again Miken67 for pointing out my screw up and I apologize to my readers for fouling it up.  Life has been quite hectic for me this last month or so and I just didn't pay enough attention when I posted the last two chapters. 

Sincerely
Snake_eater1960

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Dear Snake_Eater
please continue writting about Dan and Sues ( and everyone elses) adventures. I love reading your stories, it's engrossing, the action and sex scenes are pretty well written and fun to read. I loved the first book and even more love this second book.

I'm looking forward to you continuing the story

Best regards
Alex Rider

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Keep going. I look for updates daily. I can't wait to see where it goes.

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(In response to the author's request for advice on whether to continue or end the story here)

The plot seems to be winding its way to an inevitable conclusion; although there's discussion of changing the security system, as far as I can tell the last real threat was back in Chapter 11. You've made it to a landmark date (Christmas) and resolved most other plot threads I can think of. For this book at least, it feels like the natural progression is to add one more chapter covering the return to San Diego and call it there, and if you're planning on being done with the series another chapter covering Dan finally formally leaving the service to permanently relocate to the island.

However, you've built up quite the stable of capable and well-developed characters, with plenty of opportunity to either expand or retrench. There's only been, what, one rotation at BUDS? Are there going to be additional consequences for Jeff's team capturing pedophiles and dropping them off at the Hells' Angels? Will the new planned security system get used in anger, or will the old version see one last hurrah, as gruesome as forethought? What kind of young adult will Amore blossom into? If you're up for writing another book, I'd definitely be on board as a reader with exploring one or more of these issues.

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Keep going please

Keep going.  I are really in to this story

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Yes please keep it g[ingenious. I love your characters and am intrigued where your mind will take us.  I check every day to see if a new chapter is available.  Thank you for sharing your talant with us.

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Please continue, at least until the babies are born.
Then a book 3 when Dan leaves military service and they all relocate to the island.

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I have looked forward to each new chapter and would like to see the story continue, thank you for such a great story

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Continue. However perhaps further development of the Admiral's character with his quick retirement and move to the Island in order to oversee the development of it's infrastructure.

Threats and action toward Dan and Sue also demanding the growth of their intelligence and protection business. Especially as the Island develops.

Thanks for the story, It's been enjoyable. However a Book 3 may be needed.

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Continue

(posted from Chapter 16 (An Island Christmas))

Cañ not wait to read the next chapter.

(posted from Chapter 22 (The Weekend))

Really enjoyed Book 1 and I'm enjoying Book 2 alot.

I thoroughly enjoyed the first book.  I've been holding off reading this one until it is complete, but I don't think I'm going to last... I'm getting a little too eager to see what comes next

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eezergoode wrote:

I thoroughly enjoyed the first book.  I've been holding off reading this one until it is complete, but I don't think I'm going to last... I'm getting a little too eager to see what comes next

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Thank You for the kind words and I sincerely hope you like the second book as well as the first.  Unfortunately I'm not sure when this second book will be finished.

Thanks again
Snake_eater1960