Alq
Inebriated
Member since 2007-Nov-10
Posts: 19
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its really good so far please continue
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Xaiverphoenix89
Tipsy
Member since 2008-Mar-25
Posts: 4
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I'm liking it so far its very intriguing:) not enough story with empathy if you ask me keep up the good work
(posted from School)
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Xaiverphoenix89
Tipsy
Member since 2008-Mar-25
Posts: 4
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now i'm very intersted cant wait to read the next one
(posted from Ordeal)
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Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87
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Thank you, Xaiverphoenix89. I'm happy that you enjoyed the first two chapters of TTGB. I hope that you will enjoy chapter three as much and that my continued efforts will be as enjoyable.
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Txthumper
Tipsy
Member since 2007-Oct-25
Posts: 4
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Look forward to seeing how you continue the plot. Keep up the good work
(posted from School)
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Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87
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Thank you, Txthumper. I hope that you will continue to enjoy the story. By the way, I posted corrections to the first three chapters. I'm sure there are lots of errors I missed, but I hope that I fixed some of the worst grammar mistakes.
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NemesisQ
Tipsy
Member since 2007-Mar-10
Posts: 3
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Darn you for keeping me up late reading the newest chapter (4). /sarcasm
Keep up the good work, can't wait to read more.
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Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87
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Hello. NemesisQ
Sorry to have kept you up, but I'm very happy that you enjoyed the chapter  I hope the wait for the next update will not be so long as this one was.
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Black Rose
Evil Bar Wench
Member since 2006-Nov-27
Posts: 164
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I also liked this chapter, although I had several distractions that kept me from reading it with anything resembling promptness. Keep up the good work, don't get discouraged, write more... :-)
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"Being a writer is a very peculiar sort of a job: it's always you versus a blank sheet of paper (or a blank screen) and quite often the blank piece of paper wins." – Neil Gaiman
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circum
Tipsy
Member since 2007-Nov-14
Posts: 1
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INSANELY EFFING GOOD. My typical evil-overlord response would be to threaten you with disembowelment or another hideous punishment if you don't GIVE ME THE REST ALL RIGHT NOW; however, I've found that that isn't a good way to get authors to do anything (except kill the main characters to spite you), so I'll settle for giving you a high five and ominous smile.
Keep up the good work!
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87
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Thank you, Circum. I'm very pleased that you are enjoying the story so much. I am working on the new chapter as rapidly as I can, which isn't as fast as I'd like, but one must do one's best and hope it is enough.
By the way, which character did you want me to kill to spite you? 
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Timotheos
Inebriated
Member since 2008-Dec-22
Posts: 15
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Hey Corvis, great job on the story so far, keep up the good work ^_^.
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Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87
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Thank you, Timotheos. I'm working on the next chapter now, and I hope to have it done before too much longer. I hope my future efforts will prove as enjoyable.
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gadget
Inebriated
Member since 2007-Jul-19
Posts: 22
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Sorry didn't do feedback on each chapter. Had to read the whole thing at one sitting. The story pulled me in and kept going. Chapter 1 reminded me of my sophmore year in high school when I put one of the jocks in the hospital with a ruptured spleen, from about 20 gut shots with both fists in less than a minute. I was only 5'1" 140lbs. Please keep it rolling!
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Corvis
Contributor
Member since 2006-Nov-28
Posts: 87
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I'm happy that you're enjoying TTGB. I hope I won't keep you waiting too long on the next chapter.
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Bd.Carlo
Inebriated
Member since 2009-Nov-7
Posts: 62
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nice story, and i really don't like it when people tell the writer to work faster, but I must say I was tempted to. instead I well settle for asking if i should wait expectantly, aka check every day, or just wait normally.
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"Genius may have its limitations, but stupidity is not thus handicapped." Elbert Hubbard
"A bookstore is one of the only pieces of evidence we have that people are still thinking." Jerry Seinfeld
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deunan5122
Tipsy
Member since 2009-Dec-8
Posts: 4
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I am a new fan. This is simply awesome. For what little you've given us it is enough to make us wanna come back for more. Thanks for the joys I got from reading your writings. Looking forward to more.
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James Marcus
Contributor
Member since 2010-Jun-15
Posts: 120
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Great Story, and very interesting ideas
(posted from Mr G)
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StoryJunkie
Wasted
Member since 2010-Dec-31
Posts: 191
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I like this story so far, and I hope you find the time to continue it.
(posted from Mr G)
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Aundae
Inebriated
Member since 2011-Dec-4
Posts: 15
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Love this story!
i really hope you continue this one, it is too good to be without an end
(posted from Mr G)
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Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55
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I don't know how I missed reading this before.
Excellent story with enough scope to grow into ongoing series.
Sad to see it has stopped prematurely.
(posted from Mr G)
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If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
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Honeyugger
Tipsy
Member since 2022-Jul-18
Posts: 6
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Hi all.
I hope the author is still around. Been a long time since updates
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Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 5958
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The last I heard, this author - who used to be a close friend of mine - is no longer on the Internet. (How he survives that way is beyond me.) I have not actually spoken to him in at least 15 years or more. I actually met him face-to-face once, but have since completely lost touch.
All this is to say, no, the author is no longer around.
Eric Storm
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Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM.
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Dadrepus
Wasted
Member since 2023-Jan-12
Posts: 141
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Another pretty decent story that doesn't finish. Has anyone found any more of this anywhere else?
(posted from Mr G)
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Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-)
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Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 5958
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Corvis is no longer on the Internet, and hasn't been for a VERY long time.
Eric Storm
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