Triplet Troubles
by Jefferson
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Triplet Troubles

(Serial / Novel - Completed)



Rated X
Originally Posted on: 2008-04-23
Last Updated on: 2011-12-12
Genre(s): Drama
Code(s) Used: bd, inc, reluc
Pairings Used: fM
Total Downloads: 6042
Units in Item: 4
Median Download Count: 1429
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A story about a single father who cheated on his wife ten years ago and the vengeance his three young daughters took on him for his crimes against them and their mother.

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2008-Apr-24 @ 8:02 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 887

Triplet Troubles

A story about a single father who cheated on his wife ten years ago and the vengeance his three young daughters took on him for his crimes against them and their mother.


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2008-Apr-24 @ 4:37 PM
advancewar
Wasted
Member since 2007-Feb-6
Posts: 204

good storie. i think i woulda tied em all down to a bed and made em wait till they starved or told me were the pics were. hes going to go to jail anyway might as well get a lil revenge before you go.

(posted from Chapter 4)


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2008-Apr-25 @ 7:09 AM
cffcffc
Tipsy
Member since 2007-Sep-25
Posts: 6

I agree w/ advancewar good story. not your best but good enough
for me to read it all

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2008-Apr-25 @ 7:39 AM
Eric Storm
Pub Owner
Member since 2006-Sep-13
Posts: 5971

CFFCFFC:

Just a followup question to your comment, and to help out the author...

What would have made the story better, in your eyes?  "Not your best" by itself doesn't tell the author where he needs to improve...

Eric


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2008-Apr-25 @ 10:46 AM
advancewar
Wasted
Member since 2007-Feb-6
Posts: 204

honestly i think if you made him get a little bit more revenge i think it woulda been alot better. i do relize that hes supposed to ahve refrained becus of his personality but you asked for what we want not what the charecter would do lol.

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2008-Oct-8 @ 9:07 AM
Terminaxe
Tipsy
Member since 2008-May-9
Posts: 9

I think when you had him depressed after the death was true to showing how he really felt about his daughters and explains why he did what he did in my opinion.

That part made me go..well sad that she would do that over a stupid unfeeling uncaring parent she had. Shame her sisters and father did not notice before hand to prevent her. It would have added like maybe a chapter to two.

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2008-Oct-9 @ 1:38 PM
advancewar
Wasted
Member since 2007-Feb-6
Posts: 204

dam just looked at my last post and my spelling is worse then usual.


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2009-Apr-16 @ 11:41 AM
Jefferson
Contributor
Member since 2006-Dec-3
Posts: 455

Summer Roadtrip, Triplet Troubles, Adam Knight and a few other stories I've written, have been removed, at my request, from this site and others. If or when they will be re-posted, has not been determined. My apologies to those interested in reading them.


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2010-May-27 @ 11:00 PM
Peterran
Tipsy
Member since 2009-May-5
Posts: 2

Good but spoilt by the sudden ending

(posted from Chapter 4)


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