A tutor's payment
by Kahmnd
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tutor's payment, A

(Short Story - Completed)



Rated XXX
Originally Posted on: 2012-10-17
Last Updated on: 2012-10-17
Genre(s): Fantasy
Code(s) Used: first, teen
Pairings Used: mF
Total Downloads: 2312
Units in Item: 1
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A teenager tutors more then girls

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2012-Oct-18 @ 3:33 AM
Bridget
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Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 888

A tutor's payment

A teenager tutors more then girls


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2012-Oct-19 @ 8:24 PM
James Marcus
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Posts: 120

Very good start. However everything came off a little rushed, I would a a bit more description of the people and their actions, their surroundings or what is going on around them, maybe some background stuff to give everyone a better feel of the characters and who they are. But definitely a good start.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2012-Oct-21 @ 2:42 AM
Crusader
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Member since 2007-Jul-19
Posts: 156

James M, i wouldn't hold your breath.
Kahmnd has been posting for years at stories.xnxx and all of his characters seem to have very little trouble falling into money and getting almost everything that they are striving for without much trouble, at least that is how they read to me.

don't get me wrong, the stories he has been posting are good for a quick jerk (and I've been using them as such for years), but if your looking for an in-depth story, where the plot nails you and almost forces to you come back for more..... nuff said.

all of that being said, he is still 10 times a better writer then I am.

-Crusader


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