The first 5 chapters are being reposted with the new ones so I can get all the formats the same.
It's scary how much time went past since I started posting this without me finishing the edits.
Sorry.

(posted from Chapter 1: The Attic)

I enjoyed this story.  Started reading it a couple of years ago, then stopped.  Started re-reading s few days ago, and finished today.  I hope you will continue this story taking up when the characters are a few years older.  Thanks.

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Wow, fantastic story, just finished chapter 19, is that the end or are there more chapters?  If more, how many chapters total?

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ptbrainum wrote:

Wow, fantastic story, just finished chapter 19, is that the end or are there more chapters?  If more, how many chapters total?

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I suppose I should have put THE END at the end? Sorry, I wasn't really thinking. That is the story as I wrote it, except the new chapter 18, back in 2009. It was my first story. At the end of 2009 I had stuff going on that prevented me from writing, so I ended it there and went away from writing for over 5 years. There is still a lot of potential for My Neighbor's Incest, but I don't see myself continuing it.

On that note, I'm really having a difficult time for the past few months and they only seem to be getting worse. I'm trying to get back to writing, but feel like everything is against me. Life seems to be in the spin cycle and I can get out of the washer. I'll keep trying, and try to keep you posted, but I can't promise anything else right now.

BiStander, I have just finished bing-reading Incest Neighbors. My eyes hurt but it's worth it. A fantastic story with an ending that begs for a sequel.
Keep up the good writing.

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Really well done for a first story…enjoyable

(posted from Chapter 1: The Attic)

I'm glad I discovered this site and these stories. I initially went searching for "Potential" cause chapter 6 was missing on sexstories.com Then I discovered here that you wrote 40 chapters and it is ongoing. You have my post for that story.

This story so far has been great. The plot twists, revelations, totally surprised me. Can't wait for this to be 40 chapters and above. In this one story you have shown how destructive incest can be as well how compelling and beautiful as well. Bravo! Please continue. Let us read how they grow up and handle life's and love's twist and turns. Thanks.

Have been trying to read every author's entries alphabetically and I am 3/4 of the way through. But I keep rereading this story. It is an emotional powerhouse and I have been able to glean more with every subsequent reading. Bistander has let us all know he would not be adding a continuation of this story. I feel it deserves many more chapters. How do we convince you to continue? I wish I knew.

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)

Dadrepus wrote:

How do we convince you to continue? I wish I knew.

Throwing heaping gobs of cash in his direction might work...  Just sayin'...



Eric Storm

Eric Storm wrote:

Dadrepus wrote:

How do we convince you to continue? I wish I knew.

Throwing heaping gobs of cash in his direction might work...  Just sayin'...



Eric Storm

That might work. If I got paid for the hours I've spent writing that series and Potential at the rate I made as an IT specialist, I'd buy GoDaddy for Eric.

Dadrepus and all the others who have been asking for the last ten years, I'm not sure I could ever add anything that would do that story justice. I once took a stab at something called Jasmine's Beach Therapy. It takes place in a different location and Jasmine meets a psychologist named Cindy, who takes Jasmine to her house. At least two versions reached quite a few words, but those stories kept going down rabbit holes and I could never bring them to an end.

That was ten years ago, and potential came about out of that work. That's been my life ever since. I'm not sure I could ever get back into the same mindset and write more MNI without Potential creeping in. Plus, MNI takes place before cell phones. They don't use computers in the story. How did that even happen?

Okay, it'll probably never happen, but heaps of money or any money might motivate me after Potential finishes. That should be soon.

im amazed this was a first attempt at weighting . it has the same quality and strength of character description as Potential.
I'm really enjoying it, big thumbs up..

(posted from Chapter 6: What’s Love Got to do with it?)

All I can say is what a wonderful story, and so nice to have a happy ending. I actually got so tied up in the characters I wished I was one of them, I kept thinking back to my childhood and early teens. So well written

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)

Dear BiStander,
    Very nice, really loved it. 

When last I mentioned, (in the Potential form) I was on Chap 5 of this story and at the time I thought it more light hearted then Potential (Potential has been brutal on my emotions), but I had no idea in Chap 5 that it would bloom the way it did. Just finished this last night, and still heart struck.   
I’m beginning to think these two tales where written as love stories, with the added benefit of eroticism. 
At the end of these tales, (as of this date Potential is at Chap 41) its not sex that keeps me emotionally unstable for days, but the personal bonds your characters form. They both bring out so many repressed feelings, it just hurts.  Thank you for pulling my heart out. =-)
I’ll stop rambling. I just wanted you to know, I will read anything you put on paper.

Thank you!

TT.

Yo know, this is the third time I have read this and it still brings tears to my eyes. You may not realize what a gem of a story this is. I hope you some ay find the time to add to this story but if not, this is a wonderfully uplifting ending.

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)

Thank you to those above who have taken the time to post a comment here, and I'm sorry it has taken me so long to say that. I have not been so busy with life stuff or preoccupied with things other than writing since before I started writing 15 years ago. I hope that things will change soon or I might forget how to write. It's already been so long that I've completely lost the mental and emotional threads to the characters in Potential. I may have to go back and read the story, something I try to never do because I know I'll start editing it instead of finishing it.

Bistander,
I am sorry to hear you may have "lost the mental and emotional threads" to this masterpiece. Hopefully, the "life stuff" which is occupying your time isn't daunting or harmful to you. As a fan of this and other Potential stories by you, I can only say that I hope you continue with this one. It has surprisingly touched sympathetic nerves in me. Thank you for your time, and keep writing! You have great talent.

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Raybo wrote:

Bistander,
I am sorry to hear you may have "lost the mental and emotional threads" to this masterpiece. Hopefully, the "life stuff" which is occupying your time isn't daunting or harmful to you. As a fan of this and other Potential stories by you, I can only say that I hope you continue with this one. It has surprisingly touched sympathetic nerves in me. Thank you for your time, and keep writing! You have great talent.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Thank you, and I will keep writing.

Hot!!!

(posted from Chapter 2: Brains, Balls or Just Plain Evil?)

Awesome story

(posted from Chapter 4: What happened in Pennsylvania?)

Beautiful

(posted from Chapter 5: First Day of School)

Very sexy, I can’t wait to read the next chapter.

(posted from Chapter 7: My Promise)

Beautiful

(posted from Chapter 13: When We Were Young)

Outstanding

(posted from Chapter 14: Come to the Front Door)

Absolutely beautiful!

(posted from Chapter 18: Christmas Break)

Absolutely beautiful story! Please do not stop writing. The emotion that you write about is fantastic as it is erotic.

(posted from Chapter 19: We Can Share)