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2012-Jun-16 @ 8:01 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5753 |
Just a tip: If the whole hermaphrodite thing is this important, it really ought to be in the story description. Not everyone reads the forum before reading a story. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2012-Jun-16 @ 9:37 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Will do Eric Will do. Will through that into the Story description. I am still actually working on the story description details. I did a general blurb but I need to write something a bit more drawing in my opinion. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jun-16 @ 5:24 PM | |
celf Contributor Member since 2011-Oct-1 Posts: 107 |
O boy i like this.
What? therapist ? that don't sound right. or work in the flow of the story.
warm? ( that's ment to be 'war' right? ) ----- |
2012-Jun-17 @ 12:05 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5753 |
Three things: ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2012-Jun-17 @ 12:42 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Thank you for pointing out the Therapist one, its an auto correct short had that appears here and there that I have yet to removed from the auto correct profile on my word program. Thank you for your enjoyment of the story. I will have chapter two probably by the end of the week. I will also do some more prof reading. I spent most of the day editing the raw version of the story yesterday and thus I am pretty sure some stupid typing errors slipped past me. Spelling and grammar are something that I am constantly trying to improve upon. It does not deter me from my joy and love of writing though. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jun-17 @ 4:50 AM | |
celf Contributor Member since 2011-Oct-1 Posts: 107 |
ok great/grate ( i hate my stupid dyslexia. i did not even know i did it with that word. ) ----- |
2012-Jun-17 @ 6:33 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
@celf It is okay, I took it for what it was, and I actually downloaded the program you suggested and am currently using it to go over chapter 1 with a fine tooth comb to get those pesky little grammar errors I am so fond of. As I don't have an editor, a lot of this work I have to do myself, and as most of us know it is hard to see ones own errors. But YAY. I am actually working on chapter 4 at the same time. It is currently 3699 words deep. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jun-17 @ 7:04 AM | |
celf Contributor Member since 2011-Oct-1 Posts: 107 |
yep, i do love NaturalReader it's a great little program. ----- |
2012-Jun-17 @ 7:09 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Well As soon as I am done with Chapter 4 I will edit chapter 2. I want to stay two chapters ahead of my posting curve. So that If I for some odd reason stall out, I am able to publish things over time. I have NR 9 it works pretty good though I want to download some new voice packs for it. LOL! It is helping me to find small errors. So i am quite enjoying it. I should have a completely fine tuned version of chapter 1 up on the site by the end of tonight hopefully. Doing two things at once often times complicates the speed in which I am able to post things. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jun-17 @ 7:27 AM | |
celf Contributor Member since 2011-Oct-1 Posts: 107 |
if you find a good voice for the 'Free NR 9' let me know. ----- |
2012-Jun-17 @ 8:44 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
I am looking around, but I am not to arsed about it right now. I will find new voices if I really need it. Chapter 4 is now 4,636 words. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jun-17 @ 1:54 PM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5753 |
Just so people don't go looking for it: There is no private messaging system on this forum, but you can use a form to email Wicked Storm directly. Just click the "Email" link on one of her posts. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2012-Jun-17 @ 2:14 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Ha, ha my bad about the PM comment. I am just use to other forum sites. Yes, please send emails instead. Much better method. I check my email pretty regularly. ;P ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jun-24 @ 11:59 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Wow, so I had a friend of mine who is really good at editing and proof reading. She has read and proofed Prologue. She made quite a lot of punctuation edits, and some grammar fixes. Which means I have uploaded the chapter again. But this will be the last time. Now to focus on chapter 1, the hope is that when I have edited it and she proof's it for me it should h ave only one more update to it. I will do the same with chapter two and three! So yay! I hope that all of you enjoy! ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jul-8 @ 10:50 PM | |
partha8993 Inebriated Member since 2012-Apr-15 Posts: 21 |
so, is this story has elements from digimon? no offence though ,i just noticed some concepts from there. i loved the story and also, to tell the truth, i am a fan of fur too. ----- Fighting for peace is like fucking for virginity. |
2012-Jul-15 @ 5:48 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Well Partha8993 the influence is different from dimension to dimension. This planet has more then just Digi-Mon idea to it. But you are right that it has an influence to it. However as I said in the opening statement in the prologue its all using concept and not actual cannon. I am hoping to change things enough to make them my own and also pay homage to the idea. I mean how many author's are inspired by an idea they have heard or seen some where else and put there own spin on it. No offence is taken at all. I like when people see the ideas i am trying to put in there. Thanks for the comment, the chapter 1 edit will be up soon 3 pages left to the edit actually. Then it will read much smoother. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Jul-15 @ 6:55 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Alright everyone! We have finished the edit on Chapter 1. We now have uploaded it. We hope that it reads much better for everyone. Chapter 2 is under proof-read and edit by my editor, and I am 5k words away from finishing the re-write of chapter 3. Which then will be sent to my editor for proof read and editing. Once that has happened I will be putting a lot of time and effort into the chapter 4 and five edits and finishing. Hope you guys do enjoy this story and a lot of fun is coming your way. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Nov-7 @ 12:44 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Alright everyone so my editor is having personal life issues. So I have decided that though I want the story to be the best that I will be posting it in its second stage of proof reading before it has been edited. This means things might change chapters might get shorter later and so on and so forth. However I want you all to have a chance to read the story. So later today once I have finished the second stage of proof reading chapter 3 it will be up. It has been finished being written so that is a good start. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2012-Nov-8 @ 2:02 AM | |
Freon22 Wasted Member since 2011-Aug-17 Posts: 123 |
Thank You! I just finished chapter 3 and am getting into this story, can't wait for chapter 4. :-) ----- “Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power.” ― Abraham Lincoln |
2012-Nov-10 @ 12:24 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
@freon22 I am almost finished with chapter 4's edit I am trying to shorten the chapters a bit. And once I can get an editor to be consistent with me then I will be turning them out even better not faster but a better product. I clipped chapter 4 so it should be a faster read and for me a faster edit. I only have 725 words left to re-write, then I will go through the secondary proof reading process. Thank so much for the love. ^_^ keep reading. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2015-Dec-15 @ 10:08 AM | |
johnny rotten Inebriated Member since 2015-Mar-24 Posts: 24 |
Love the story and encourage you to finish it.... ----- |
2016-Feb-7 @ 1:28 AM | |
Shaggy18 Inebriated Member since 2015-Jan-14 Posts: 11 |
Love this story. I love the concept of the hybrids, especially Indigo she seems like an awesome character. I can't wait to read more of this fantastic story. ----- |
2016-Mar-8 @ 10:35 AM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
Thank you Shaggy I will be seeing what I can do about bring this story back to life but it is on the back burner until Archon 2 is finished. And it will be probably after Brimstone continues. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |
2016-Aug-21 @ 1:43 PM | |
Glockman22 Inebriated Member since 2016-Apr-28 Posts: 22 |
another fine story you are becoming one of my favorite writers I can't wait to read more of this story! ----- |
2016-Aug-27 @ 8:23 PM | |
Wicked Storm Contributor Member since 2012-Jun-16 Posts: 368 |
You have found one of the only stories in my stable that has zero direction for it right now lol. But I will probably revisit it at some point lol. ----- In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly. |