Violation of Privacy

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2022-Apr-3 @ 8:32 PM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 782

Violation of Privacy

I must have looked like a Chihuahua being mounted by a Great Dane. That should have scared me, I should have cared, done something about it, but I didn’t. It was too late. The time to prevent what happened had passed, and I didn’t care.


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2022-Apr-4 @ 6:50 AM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55

Not the kind of thing I usually read, but
HOLY SHIT!
visceral,
gut punching imagery,
and
HOLY SHIT!
Now I want to know what happens next


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2022-Apr-5 @ 9:23 AM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

Pleidius wrote:

Not the kind of thing I usually read, but
HOLY SHIT!
visceral,
gut punching imagery,
and
HOLY SHIT!
Now I want to know what happens next

It's not the kind of stuff I normally write, either. I'm glad you liked it.


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2022-Apr-8 @ 1:18 AM
mydarkside
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jan-27
Posts: 28

WOW. OMG!
That was torrid, slightly disturbing but erotic. As always a twist or at least a hook to the next chapter. I hadn't expected that relationship in the story.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2022-Apr-8 @ 8:48 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

mydarkside wrote:

WOW. OMG!
That was torrid, slightly disturbing but erotic. As always a twist or at least a hook to the next chapter. I hadn't expected that relationship in the story.

(posted from Chapter 1)

You would, hehe


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2023-Feb-12 @ 11:10 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

This is just a repost of the original story with some small changes to it.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2023-Aug-5 @ 6:02 PM
Harddreams
Inebriated
Member since 2023-Jul-25
Posts: 24

The only thing that surprised me about this story is that it wasn't one of the priests. Painfully difficult to read surprisingly arousing even though I'm a heterosexual male.
Your writing is somehow very graphic without seeming obscene.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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