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Something Extra

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2022-Apr-30 @ 9:29 AM
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 779	Something Extra Jason has something other kids don't. He doesn't understand what it is or how it works, but he's beginning to learn ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2022-May-1 @ 9:43 PM
Josh.Bond Inebriated Member since 2014-Mar-11 Posts: 84	So far So good I like the premise and the flow. I also like that you are not describing the women like an AI body scanner, "5'6" 125 pounds 34D breasts". It feels more normal for a person. (posted from Chapter One) ----- Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2022-May-1 @ 11:44 PM
Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55	Thank you for your remarks I hope you like the story as it develops ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2022-May-2 @ 1:49 AM
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5757	Hey! I paid good money for that AI body scanner for my stories! :-P LOL Eric Storm ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2022-May-2 @ 5:59 AM
Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55	Eric Storm wrote: Hey! I paid good money for that AI body scanner for my stories! :-P LOL Eric Storm I always preferred a hands on approach . . . ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2022-May-2 @ 8:48 AM
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5757	You probably had more opportunities to apply the hands-on approach. Eric Storm ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page Report This Post \| Quote This Post
2022-Jun-2 @ 4:04 PM
Pleidius Contributor Member since 2021-Jun-10 Posts: 55	I screwed up and posted a chapter from another story here. Fixed now . . . The real chapter four has been posted. ----- If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . . Report This Post \| Quote This Post