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Take My Picture

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2022-Oct-8 @ 9:05 PM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 780

Take My Picture

A married woman, unknowingly frustrated by her life, has an encounter with her best friend's younger sister who has come home for a visit. The sister helps the woman see how the choices she made weren't her own.


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2022-Oct-9 @ 8:38 AM
Pleidius
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jun-10
Posts: 55

very nice little tale.  well written with realistic, believable characters.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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If you're prepared to face the consequences, go ahead . . .
2022-Oct-9 @ 6:13 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

Pleidius wrote:

very nice little tale.  well written with realistic, believable characters.

(posted from Chapter 1)

Thank you much for saying so.


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2022-Oct-13 @ 10:03 PM
mydarkside
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jan-27
Posts: 28

Wow, oh Wow..

Man can you tell a story. This has all the panash that I expect from you Bistander. A plot that ebbs and flows, leading you to where you know it is going, but right at the end you still manage to throw in a twist. A true love story that had everything that type of story should have. Even the small amount of sex was perfectly crafted and used at the right time.

Truly superb.

Some of the descriptions lead me to someone whose images look like the two girls with the orange background, but I know you wrote this before then.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2022-Oct-14 @ 8:51 PM
bistander
Contributor
Member since 2015-Sep-3
Posts: 241

Thank you for your kind words. So happy you enjoyed it.

"Some of the descriptions lead me to someone whose images look like the two girls with the orange background"
Whose images and where?


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2022-Oct-16 @ 7:54 PM
mydarkside
Contributor
Member since 2021-Jan-27
Posts: 28

bistander wrote:

Thank you for your kind words. So happy you enjoyed it.

"Some of the descriptions lead me to someone whose images look like the two girls with the orange background"
Whose images and where?

Sorry, that should have read Girl not two girls. Check out our mutual friend's avatar on the site where we met.


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2023-Aug-5 @ 7:44 AM
Harddreams
Inebriated
Member since 2023-Jul-25
Posts: 24

Very beautifully written story

(posted from Chapter 1)


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2023-Dec-15 @ 6:39 AM
Jaxom
Tipsy
Member since 2023-Dec-14
Posts: 1

Great story. Liked the interpersonal growth of the 2 girls.

(posted from Chapter 1)


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