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Loved the new chapter. Nick got a lot of stuff on his plate and having to bounce all around. Especially enjoyed Nick being a “teacher†.Spoilers! (Click here to view...)
Looking forward to SALT continued growth and Teresa’s improvement. How much longer until the special election for city council occurs?
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thehilz wrote:
How much longer until the special election for city council occurs?
This didn't need a spoiler tag: that the election is happening is within the publicly-available part of the story.
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About a month. The election is happening in April, we are currently at the start of March.
Unless, of course, you were talking about writing time, then... two to three years, at the rate I'm going...
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"But... why here? I mean, why Richville? We are the ass-end of nowhere."
"Exactly. No one is going to look for me here."
"But... we're not the only ass-end that nowhere has..."
Sabrina laughed. "I have never heard that phrased that way!"
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Ok where did that come from. LOL. Hope you realize that its tough to get soda out of your keyboard. It came out my nose when I read that. Burned like hell.
(posted from Chapter 19)
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hehehe. Sorry about that... sorta... kinda... a little bit... okay, that's pretty funny. Did you get it on video?
Eric Storm
PS: I hope your keyboard's okay.
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The keyboard will live but I had to shock it 3 times to restart its heart. My nose will eventually heal about the time my bruised ego gets better. LOL. I'm so embarrassed.
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LOL
Eric Storm
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Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Hopefully it comes out soon!
(posted from Chapter 19)
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I appreciate your eagerness, but the truth is that I haven't even started writing it yet.
Eric Storm
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Damn, really good so far. These are the kinds of stories I like to read. Sex is just woven into the lives of people without it being the main part of the story. When the stories are long like this you can see the author had more to say besides lets screw. Great work, can't wait for more chapters.
(posted from Chapter 19)
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And yet this is probably the long-form story of mine that comes the closest to just saying "let's screw!"
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Eric Storm
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I love the story and the characters. Hope to see more soon. Thanks Eric.
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Liked it so much you had to post twice, huh? LOL
Glad you're enjoying the story.
Eric Storm
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Oh how I want more of this story. please
(posted from Chapter 19)
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Mommy targets sure seem to be growing in numbers quickly. Only problem with the chapter I had was that it ended. Hope your muses continue to work with you.
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Another exemplary chapter.Thank you
(posted from Chapter 20)
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Glad y'all are enjoying the story.
Eric Storm
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This chapter was very good. I see mommy's in Nick's future and always did like sleeping with a pregnant woman. LOL
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I liked this chapter, I felt a bit more was going on. Unfortunately, either because of the unfortunate pauses between chapters or so much good stuff is going on, I am struggling to keep up with who is who and what position they place in the story. Again, that could just be the pause in the chapters but I wish there was a way to remedy this.
(posted from Chapter 21)
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Elessar wrote:
I am struggling to keep up with who is who and what position they place in the story.
(posted from Chapter 21)
Thank you.
Vindication!!!
Ha!!!!!
*Drops the mic. Exits Stage left*
Last edited by Jefferson (2023-04-28 16:46:55)
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Superb chapter Mr. Storm
(posted from Chapter 21)
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Jefferson wrote:
Elessar wrote:
I am struggling to keep up with who is who and what position they place in the story.
(posted from Chapter 21)Thank you.
Vindication!!!
Ha!!!!!
*Drops the mic. Exits Stage left*
Eric watches Jefferson get tangled in the mic cord, trip, fall down the stairs, crash into a pregnant lady who loses her balance and sits down right on his crotch, causing the girliest scream ever uttered by a male in human history...
Yes, well, clearly your memory is so bad you don't remember that I sent you a cast list, so not REALLY vindication... you probably forgot where you put it.
For the rest of you:
PRM cast list (up through Chapter 21): (View at your own risk if you don't have PRM.)Spoilers! (Click here to view...)
House Residents:
Jennifer - Mother
Teresa - Older sister
Mary ( "Mess" ) - Younger sister
Barbara Kurtz - Cousin, chief of security
Pat Tambor - Former neighbor, now girlfriend
Ayumi Saito - girlfriend, housekeeper
Emma Fattore - servant
Maria Fattore - servant
City Hall Employees:
Joyce Asante - Councilor
Nina Paltrow - Councilor's Office Manager
Tamitha Jackson - Councilor's clerk
*Gail Simmons - Public Affairs Officer
SALT Employees:
Linda Anderson - CEO
Helen Larsen - Legal Counsel/Accountant
Rachel Berculosi - head of Salt of the Earth Designs
Ruth Adams - head of Anadur Household Goods
Housewives:
*Lily Shasta (cleans her pool)
Gina Charleston (knitting circle)
Mel Blackstone (Linda's sister - not currently in story, may reappear)
Lottie Henley (Husband's a shit - not currently in story, may reappear)
School-related:
Alicia Amador - math teacher
Elena Montoya - principal
Miscellaneous:
Hayley Burke - girlfriend, bodyguard
Michaela "Mimi" McClaren - nurse, Mommy Target
Agent Julia Cantor - FBI Agent, girlfriend
(Asterisks indicate currently pregnant characters.)
Non-PRM cast list (Up through Chapter 15): Spoilers! (Click here to view...)
House Residents:
Jennifer - Mother
Teresa - Older sister
Mary ( "Mess" ) - Younger sister
Pat Tambor - Former neighbor, now girlfriend
Ayumi Saito - girlfriend, housekeeper
Emma Fattore - servant
City Hall Employees:
Joyce Asante - Councilor
Nina Paltrow - Councilor's Office Manager
Tamitha Jackson - Councilor's clerk
*Gail Simmons - Public Affairs Officer
SALT Employees:
Linda Anderson - CEO
Helen Larsen - Legal Counsel/Accountant
Rachel Berculosi - head of Salt of the Earth Designs
Housewives:
*Lily Shasta (cleans her pool)
Mel Blackstone (Linda's sister - not currently in story, may reappear)
Lottie Henley (Husband's a shit - not currently in story, may reappear)
School-related:
Alicia Amador - math teacher
Elena Montoya - principal
Miscellaneous:
Hayley Burke - girlfriend, bodyguard
Agent Julia Cantor - FBI Agent, girlfriend
(Asterisks indicate currently pregnant characters.)
Geez. A couple dozen characters, and everyone's all confused. I have no trouble telling them apart...
Eric Storm
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I found the conversation that occurs at the start of the chapter extremely funny. “It’s about this long†if I had been drinking something it would have ended up on my tablet. Going to go out on a limb and guess that we met Nick’s future office manger in this chapter. As always looking forward to the continuation of the story.
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Elessar wrote:
I liked this chapter, I felt a bit more was going on. Unfortunately, either because of the unfortunate pauses between chapters or so much good stuff is going on, I am struggling to keep up with who is who and what position they place in the story. Again, that could just be the pause in the chapters but I wish there was a way to remedy this.
(posted from Chapter 21)
You could always re-read the story before getting to the new chapter.
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I don't recall how many times I have re-read the story and when there is a delay mixed with life, it does get confusing.
Hakhazar wrote:
Elessar wrote:
I liked this chapter, I felt a bit more was going on. Unfortunately, either because of the unfortunate pauses between chapters or so much good stuff is going on, I am struggling to keep up with who is who and what position they place in the story. Again, that could just be the pause in the chapters but I wish there was a way to remedy this.
(posted from Chapter 21)You could always re-read the story before getting to the new chapter.
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Elessar wrote:
I don't recall how many times I have re-read the story and when there is a delay mixed with life, it does get confusing.
Hakhazar wrote:
You could always re-read the story before getting to the new chapter.
Doesn't really invalidate Hakhazar's point, now does it?
Eric Storm
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