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#1 2011-02-15 01:41:20
One Fine Day
One Fine Day
When her boyfriend had left for the day, he came in and made himself right at home, taking whatever he pleased.
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#2 2011-02-15 11:35:59
- Cenobite829
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Re: One Fine Day
Actually not a bad little story. I did something very close to this to an old girl friend of mine and she just loved it so thia brought back some good memories.
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#3 2011-02-15 11:37:09
- Cenobite829
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Re: One Fine Day
Sorry about the double post. Don't know why that happened.
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#4 2011-02-15 19:00:05
- Eric Storm
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Re: One Fine Day
Glad you liked it. This was written for LAoW for Valentine's Day. (Yes, we're weird. 
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I deleted your duplicate post for you.
Thanks for the feedback,
Eric
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#5 2011-02-16 16:57:30
- nightsecho
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Re: One Fine Day
i liked it. very nice
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