Bad Babette! Trabajo!
by CreepyUnclePete
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Bad Babette! Trabajo!

(Serial / Novel - In Progress)



Rated XX
Originally Posted on: 2025-02-07
Last Updated on: 2025-03-08
Genre(s): Drama , Romance
Code(s) Used: ds, rom, solo, voy, young
Pairings Used: MF, fM, gM
Total Downloads: 1808
Units in Item: 6
Median Download Count: 296
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Jack rescues and adopts a pregnant young housekeeper, and helps raise her troublesome daughter.

Includes underage sex, smoking, and descriptions of past abuse. Some tags / codes are in later chapters.

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2025-Feb-8 @ 6:25 AM
Bridget
Barmaid
Member since 2006-Sep-9
Posts: 879

Bad Babette! Trabajo!

Jack rescues and adopts a pregnant young housekeeper, and helps raise her troublesome daughter.

Includes underage sex, smoking, and descriptions of past abuse. Some tags / codes are in later chapters.


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2025-Feb-8 @ 11:34 AM
JustLucky
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Member since 2021-Oct-11
Posts: 63

Pretty damned good, would make a nice series!

(posted from the Item Information Page)


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2025-Feb-8 @ 11:58 AM
CreepyUnclePete
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Member since 2023-Jan-13
Posts: 31

I'm glad you like the story. Thanks so much for commenting!


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2025-Feb-8 @ 8:41 PM
abaddon.pale
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Member since 2018-Sep-11
Posts: 92

Pretty good story.. Maybe one of your best so far.  I like how sassy Babette is. 

Constructive feedback… and this is just a suggestion, your story your rules.

#1 It seems Rosa is fairly open minded ( but not overly so ) about Jack’s interactions with Babbet. Maybe she should suggest he spank her in some of the early interactions. 

#2 Rosa and Jack are “friends” maybe a bit more of their relationship could be explored. Other than the benefits and she works for him.
#3 I’m not sure Jack ever mentions what he does for a living. And there is a general lack of color in his life other than Rosa and Babbet… a few paragraphs here and there in each chapter about life in general… just to add color would be nice.
#4 The sex and naughty scenes could be longer with more detail. There is a LOT of potential hotness in this story that is..ehm… left untapped.


All in All it was and is a very enjoyable read.  I am not a PRM member ( though I am a PRM content contributor ) so I look forward to reading the last chapter once it becomes available.

(posted from Chapter 5)


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2025-Feb-8 @ 8:54 PM
CreepyUnclePete
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Member since 2023-Jan-13
Posts: 31

Thanks for reading, Abaddon, and for the suggested improvements.

I mostly agree, the story could be much better if I spent another week or two working on it.

Unfortunately, I have very limited time and ideas for 73 zillion other stories. LOL


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