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2025-Aug-19 @ 7:04 PM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 869 |
Ice Cream Ike ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2025-Aug-20 @ 2:44 PM | |
JustLucky Inebriated Member since 2021-Oct-11 Posts: 43 |
Well that was a surprisingly good read! ----- |
2025-Aug-21 @ 7:09 PM | |
abaddon.pale Contributor Member since 2018-Sep-11 Posts: 87 |
Not a bad first chapter. There is not a lot of conflict in the story internal or external but the scenes are hot. It's more Mf than Mg though. Perhaps you are planning for Mg in later chapters. Constructive Feedback: you could put more visual description into the story to make it feel more "lived in" describe the environment, sights, sounds, smells etc. ----- |
2025-Aug-22 @ 4:32 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5918 |
Not having read the story, I just want to clarify, in case there is confusion: "f" versus "g" is based entirely on the physical age of the female. "f" is a girl from 13-17 years of age (inclusive). "g" is anyone age 12 or younger. Again, I haven't read this story, so I don't know which tag applies, I'm just making sure the terms are understood. ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |