Thrilling chapter Eric. Not sure whether to applaud your choice of cliffhanger though.

(posted from Chapter 5: Lending a Hand)

I hate cliffhangers :-) 
Best chapter yet!

(posted from Chapter 5: Lending a Hand)

Damn you write good!

(posted from Chapter 5: Lending a Hand)

bigro wrote:

Please change the format to one that all of can read. I am interested in reading it

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Issue might be it is a prerelease story.  Making a financial donation usually unlocks those stories.

Timberwolf92 wrote:

Thrilling chapter Eric. Not sure whether to applaud your choice of cliffhanger though.

(posted from Chapter 5: Lending a Hand)

JustLUcky wrote:

I hate cliffhangers :-)

Cliffhanger?  What's a cliffhanger?  0

Eric Storm

Zmaybe wrote:

bigro wrote:

Please change the format to one that all of can read. I am interested in reading it

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Issue might be it is a prerelease story.  Making a financial donation usually unlocks those stories.

If that is, indeed, the issue, then they can just wait until it comes out of PRM.

Eric Storm

Both a literal and a figurative cliffhanger...

(posted from the Item Information Page)

You say you have 19 chapters completed and that gives you a little over a year of "buffer". So, what is your intended release interval? About every 3 weeks?
It would allow me to check in around the release interval rather than the daily frustration I currently go through. I do like this story.

Eric Storm wrote:

I think you mean "release faster", as I'm already up to chapter 19 in this story.  But I'm not going to release faster, because I'm hoping to actually keep this story on its release schedule from start to finish.  That means I've got a little over a year of buffer.  I'm not squandering that by letting you read it early.

:-P

Eric Storm

The release schedule is intended to be once a month, around the 1st.  (You failed to take into account that, when I made that statement, several chapters had already been posted.)

Yes, I know that it is currently March 2nd.  I have been trying to do the final proofread of Chapter 6 for three days now.  I'm fighting illness, and I've not been able to focus well enough mentally to do the task.  I'm about 3/4 the way through it.  As soon as I can finish the proofread, I'll post it.  Should be in the next day or two, I hope.

Eric Storm

PS:  Don't you read Calvin and Hobbes?  Frustration builds character.  :-P  LOL

Feel better! Your health is more important than our satisfaction, regardless of what ever we might say 😜

Take care of yourself and I hope you feel better soon. Then go after your proofreading. That's an activity that you need to feel well so you can concentrate properly for.
I don't need Calvin and Hobbs, my wife provides all the frustration I can handle, thank you very much. I did factor the 5 chapters into my calculations. I figured you
had 14 available. I rounded down instead of up (wishful thinking?). That's OK. Hopefully, once you're better, you'll be able to include some time in the rotation for a chapter or two of AoC. :-)

Eric Storm wrote:

The release schedule is intended to be once a month, around the 1st.  (You failed to take into account that, when I made that statement, several chapters had already been posted.)

Yes, I know that it is currently March 2nd.  I have been trying to do the final proofread of Chapter 6 for three days now.  I'm fighting illness, and I've not been able to focus well enough mentally to do the task.  I'm about 3/4 the way through it.  As soon as I can finish the proofread, I'll post it.  Should be in the next day or two, I hope.

Eric Storm

PS:  Don't you read Calvin and Hobbes?  Frustration builds character.  :-P  LOL

The story just gets better and better every chapter :-)
Plus the Pre release membership privileges lol
Worth it!

(posted from Chapter 7: Rescuing Renata)

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Hopefully you will continue to do so.

Eric Storm

sweet chapter.  I saw some of the openings you left us to ponder.  Will the gangsters make an appearance sooner , rather then later.  The gangster chick sounds like she would be a good hookup for Tyler, start with defense training until they get closer... then the gangster family might get a tad racist, the "Don's princess" hanging around a black guy.  could bring a fun twist as to how they work thru those issues.  Anyhow, just a thought this chapter brought to mind.  Damn, I love your writing, always makes my mind try to figure out what's coming up later.

(posted from Chapter 9: Bree)

Chapter 9 was very interesting and enjoyable to read. Ethan keeps on finding new ladies (young and not so young). His opportunities seem endless and are fun to read about. I gave up trying to anticipate the plot turns. Your creativity is much better than mine. Thanks again for sharing that creativity with us.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Just keeps getting better and better :-)

(posted from Chapter 10: Izzy)

I apologize for not "verbalizing" how much I enjoy every chapter that you release; you are a truly superior storyteller.

(posted from Chapter 11: (Eye) Candy and Flowers)

Awesome indepth and with great sub plots :-)

(posted from Chapter 11: (Eye) Candy and Flowers)

Eric Storm wrote:

I'm not squandering that by letting you read it early.

:-P

Eric Storm

Waaaah! I wanna read it early!

:-)

Enjoying this, quite a lot.

See you in October :-)

Best Chapter yet :-)
Really getting some meat on the bones of the story!
10/10

(posted from Chapter 13: Harem Growth 2)

Very good story hope for more very soon.

(posted from Chapter 14: Evie)

Interesting chapter, cant wait to see where this goes :-)

(posted from Chapter 14: Evie)

interesting kink

(posted from Chapter 14: Evie)

well THAT was intense :-)

(posted from Chapter 15: Ethan)

one word - - - ouch

(posted from Chapter 15: Ethan)