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Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 868 |
2 Germans a Dane and Me ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
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temnix Tipsy Member since 2025-Jan-17 Posts: 8 |
I love how crude this is. I mean, you could have written some fine intrigue, an involved introduction to bestial sex, with emotions, development, characters that draw the reader in, but I prefer it this way, simple and not very good. I mean, it's good that it doesn't try to be very good. It's just about dirty fucking, like a close-up of a cock and cunt. It is about behaving as a piece of meat, and the story itself is a piece of meat. Plus there is so much free swearing, which is also a turn-on. I wonder if you are a girl for real? ----- |