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2023-Aug-31 @ 10:26 PM | |
Bridget Barmaid Member since 2006-Sep-9 Posts: 782 |
Fantasy Story ----- Please read The Mystic Wolf Pub Critiquing Guide. SITE CONTENT POLICY: The administrator of this site will not reject, remove, or censor any story posted to this site based on the story's content. No story shall be removed except for purely technical reasons (which will be worked out with the author so that the story can be reposted as quickly as possible), or due to a direct order from the site's hosting provider, a law-enforcement entity, or the story's owner. |
2023-Aug-31 @ 11:01 PM | |
Skyscraper Contributor Member since 2022-Sep-14 Posts: 20 |
Sorry for the horrible font choice. I was going for something old english-y. Might not have been the best choice. ----- You're either born with common sense or you're not. I was not. |
2023-Sep-1 @ 9:30 AM | |
Zmaybe Inebriated Member since 2021-Jun-27 Posts: 64 |
What a terrible format. Too hard to read. Gave me a head ache just trying to read the first paragraph. It may be a good story, but as it is right now I will not be reading it. A good writer uses a font that works for the majority of possible readers, This author decided not to . Good luck. ----- |
2023-Sep-1 @ 7:45 PM | |
Skyscraper Contributor Member since 2022-Sep-14 Posts: 20 |
Yeah. I realized that. Was trying something new. I reverted back to Times New Roman. Sorry for the headache. ----- You're either born with common sense or you're not. I was not. |
2023-Sep-2 @ 7:27 AM | |
Elessar Completely Blotto Member since 2009-Oct-28 Posts: 397 |
I’m very curious to where this is going. So far seems very familiar but that could be the fantasy aspect of it.
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2023-Sep-2 @ 10:57 AM | |
Eric Storm Pub Owner Member since 2006-Sep-13 Posts: 5758 |
I'd just like to point out that a "good writer", that is a professional writer... ----- Please Remember: The right to Freedom of Speech does not carry the proviso, "As long as it doesn't upset anyone." The US Constitution does not grant you the right to not be offended. If you don't like what someone's saying... IGNORE THEM. ---- Facebook page |
2023-Sep-2 @ 8:40 PM | |
Skyscraper Contributor Member since 2022-Sep-14 Posts: 20 |
Transitions between time periods... I wanted to make sure I had my bases covered with something aside from the stereotypical "--" to delineate a change in time. The perspective is something I hope to make clearer as the story goes on (key word being hope). ----- You're either born with common sense or you're not. I was not. |