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Replacing Mommy
This is a story of how the relationship between a father and his adopted daughter changes one year after his wife's death. And what happens afterwards.
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Sorry but even though from the bit I did read it is a story I would like to read, I found it impossible due to not having paragraphs. It hurts my eyes to see a wall of text.
(posted from The Holiday)
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Impossible to read! Needs reformatting
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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Nice to see you folks have read the critiquing guide. Things like this issue are to be reported to the website, not the author.
Eric Storm
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The formatting - which was never the author's fault to begin with - has been fixed. This was a site problem caused by the recent update breaking the site's ability to handle plaintext files.
This is why you don't report this kind of thing to the author, or in the author's forum sections. You report it to me, either through email, or in the Website Issues section of the forum. If the author needs to fix something, I will let them know, but many times, the problem isn't with the author, as in this case... and now you've just bothered them for nothing at all.
And gotten yelled at. Was it worth it?
Eric Storm
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