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The Crucible
Dan, Susan, Courtney, Elizabeth, Anne, Cheyenne, Jacob, Ada, Diane, Darlene, and others' lives brush against each other as their goals and fears collide and become trials of conflict.
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Loving the story so far!!! (Ch.9)
Very well-written, with quite good knowledge of the "scene". Looking forward to seeing where things go next.
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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Loved the first Chapter imensly! The start felt a bit rushed but from the time in college it was great. (i'm swiss so sorry for any spelling mistakes)
(posted from Chapter One)
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Hightower wrote:
The start felt a bit rushed
(posted from Chapter One)
I may go back and revisit the entire thing. I tried to have it completed before posting anything, and that didn't work out. The size of the file (which was meant to be broken up eventually anyway) got too large so my editing sucked.
Last edited by Blackie (2019-01-10 21:49:37)
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Very enjoyable story that came to an acceptable conclusion. Few gramatical and spelling errors.
(posted from Chapter Fifteen: An Ending)
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Second time reading this story and it was just as enjoyable as the first time.
(posted from Chapter Fifteen: An Ending)
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