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#1 2023-04-19 17:42:23

Bridget
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Rodeo part 2

Rodeo part 2

This is the sequel to This Ain't My First Rodeo. This takes place about 15 years (not including the rest of Skye's high school time or time in college) after the original story. This is mostly about her children, and the shenanigans they might have.

I'm not sure if a 6th-grader would be under 13 or not, so the "g" code might apply as well.


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#2 2023-04-26 02:09:25

Mikenc67
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Re: Rodeo part 2

A sixth grader should only be about 11 years old, 12 at most.

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#3 2023-07-07 02:39:14

Dadrepus
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Re: Rodeo part 2

Not a Bad start. Looking forward to the continuation. One small error in this sentence "David quietly sat down in front of her and took her hand, replacing it with his." It should be Thomas, not David.

(posted from The Beginning)


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#4 2023-07-07 07:33:16

Eric Storm
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Re: Rodeo part 2

Mikenc67 wrote:

A sixth grader should only be about 11 years old, 12 at most.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Mikenc67 is correct.  Assuming they weren't held back for academic failure, a student in sixth grade will be 10, 11, or 12, depending upon their birthday and the time of year in the story, so definitely a "g", not an "f".

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