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#1 2024-01-04 17:20:15
Pecadillos and Predilictions
Pecadillos and Predilictions
A father with a dark desire is seduced by his willing daughter.
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#2 2024-01-08 16:39:35
- bistander
- Wasted
- Registered: 2015-09-03
- Posts: 241
Re: Pecadillos and Predilictions
I got a great deal of pleasure out of helping you out with editing on this one. It was a hot little story even though I had to look up both words in the title.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#3 2024-01-24 15:02:29
- abaddon.pale
- Inebriated
- Registered: 2018-09-11
- Posts: 30
Re: Pecadillos and Predilictions
Pretty good if Short. Good Characterization, Sex scenes are hot. Could probably add gg to the tags. or Mgg.
One note, the story just sort of trails off at the end like you just stopped typing. maybe a cut and past from another program such as word, and you missed part of that last sentence.
Still enjoyed the Read.
(posted from the Item Information Page)
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