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#1 2024-05-09 19:15:57

Bridget
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Repay the Favor

Repay the Favor

A sexy, slow burn between two siblings in 11 chapters.


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#2 2024-05-14 22:50:03

bigro
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Re: Repay the Favor

Loving it so far. More soon please.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#3 2024-05-22 00:28:38

Chuckhelius
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Re: Repay the Favor

OMG... so hot!  I read it way too fast though ;(   Looking forward to the next chapter.

(posted from 4: Math Problems)

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#4 2024-05-24 17:05:16

junohatbox
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Re: Repay the Favor

Thanks all! I've been working on this for a while and was never quite sure if it was ready to share, but a little bit of feedback goes a long way.

I'm giving the remaining chapters a final edit, and one by one, I will post them as I get to them.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#5 2024-05-25 00:10:30

TheGussetMuncher
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Re: Repay the Favor

junohatbox wrote:

Thanks all! I've been working on this for a while and was never quite sure if it was ready to share, but a little bit of feedback goes a long way.

I'm giving the remaining chapters a final edit, and one by one, I will post them as I get to them.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Glad to hear it! I'm enjoying and have been watching for the next installment for the last couple days. I like that it's from the girls' perspective and that it is advancing so gradually at the pace it is. Very hot!

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#6 2024-06-06 04:06:11

Chuckhelius
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Re: Repay the Favor

I love it.. well written and keeps the surprises coming.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#7 2024-06-18 00:49:32

Chuckhelius
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Re: Repay the Favor

Another very sexy recount of teenage lust..  I love it, the right mix of innocence and being carried away by raw hormones.  Well done!

(posted from 8: The Sleepover)

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#8 2024-06-20 16:59:15

Dadrepus
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Re: Repay the Favor

Great story so far. I hope there are many more chapters.

(posted from 8: The Sleepover)


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#9 2024-07-03 04:15:53

Chuckhelius
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Re: Repay the Favor

SO Hot Hot HOT!

(posted from 10: Hot Seat)

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#10 2024-07-03 16:39:23

Dadrepus
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Re: Repay the Favor

Great Story so far. Keep it up. you’re certainly keeping me up!

(posted from 10: Hot Seat)


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#11 2024-07-07 20:12:10

Chuckhelius
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Re: Repay the Favor

Damn, I really enjoyed the story.  As good of writing as I expect here or more so.  Thank you for posting it.

(posted from 11: Finale)

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#12 2024-07-08 00:19:40

junohatbox
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Re: Repay the Favor

Chuckhelius wrote:

Damn, I really enjoyed the story.  As good of writing as I expect here or more so.  Thank you for posting it.

(posted from 11: Finale)

Thank you for reading! I've never written fiction of this length. It took a lot more time than expected and I learned a lot from the process, so I'm glad I was finally ready to share it.

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#13 2024-07-08 16:03:49

Dadrepus
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Re: Repay the Favor

Please think about further adventures for these 3 characters. Multiple stories could be told, more erotic than the next.

(posted from 11: Finale)


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#14 2024-07-10 17:15:54

junohatbox
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Re: Repay the Favor

Dadrepus wrote:

Please think about further adventures for these 3 characters. Multiple stories could be told, more erotic than the next.

(posted from 11: Finale)

I'm happy you liked it, and I definitely left some loose ends that could lead to further explorations.

A small window into my process: this was a project that I actually started during the early part of the COVID pandemic (when I had a lot more free time) and was gradually written and refined over the subsequent years until now.

With this one now wrapped, I don't currently have anything in the works. I don't think I'm done writing, but it may take some time before the next adventure.

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#15 2024-08-05 03:44:04

sodapopsweet
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Re: Repay the Favor

Nice and hot! The nerves and emotions come through vividly. Really tees this story up for some future fun.

(posted from 3. Photographs)

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#16 2024-08-05 17:15:03

sodapopsweet
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Re: Repay the Favor

Love to see some risky, public play. That’s one lucky brother!

(posted from 6: Pique)

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#17 2024-08-05 17:18:45

sodapopsweet
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Re: Repay the Favor

I love how you set up the possible risks and how the narrator acknowledges how reckless they’re being. The payoff of the close call is very erotic.

(posted from 4: Math Problems)

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