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Very excellent writings man!!  You should try and get published, if you have and they didn't sign you, dumb-asses!!  Your definitely an extremely talented writer.  I just finished Ron's Journey after being introduced to the series by sibling rivalry.  I hope you continue with that series!!  Keep up the great writing man!!!

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I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  Yes, I am continuing.  Chapter 6 of Sibling Rivalry is about halfway done.

Thanks for the feedback,
Eric

Hmmm.  Make you re-read the entire story, or just tell you....  Tough choice...

Go to the Epilogue. Re-read the last two paragraphs before "A Final Look".  Then think about the only person mentioned in the story that might fit that last paragraph.

(You didn't think I was just gonna TELL you, did you?  )

Eric Storm

I absolutely loved CAMP. Just started reading it last night and couldn’t stop until I finished it (thank god for it being a holiday). Keep up the great work.

Always denying people their sleep. Tsk tsk tsk.

You are by far my favorite author ever
Thanks for writing camp
and please keep up the great work

Eric i have been thinking about what you said about having CAMP: Ron's Journey Published, if you were to self publish and had someone that could print the book would it make it cheaper because i am willing to offer my services to have it printed and bound, up to the first 5000 copies for free.

I also have another Question.

do you have to have it published or can it just be printed in book form with a copyright sticker on it?

Last edited by Rhapsody4fire (2010-10-21 17:32:38)

Eric,just to say thanks for the pleasure of reading your stories.  So far I have read The Favour and Arifacts1.  Both good reads with chatacters that became well developed and drove the story lines along at a good clip.
Thought you would lke to know that due to the friendly nature of your download system, I have downloaded Ron's Journey, converted it to PDF and it now sits on my e-reader.  Go anywhere at the drop o a hat.  Cheers!!

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On the subject of publishing this, it would indeed be impossible in the story's current form. However, you might consider editing the story to reduce the amount and explicity (is that a word?) of the sex. In the, say, post-CAMP part of the book this would be quite simple since (for as I can see) it only serves to strengthen emotional connections between characters, which is something that could very well be done differently (this is in no way critisism). In the first part though, it has a far bigger role, and therefore would be far harder to replace. But since you, clearly, are a talented writer (judging from the enormous amounts of positive reactions) I think you could find a way to do so without compromising on the integrity of the story.

It is quite clear that the storyline is the prevailing source of compliments, not the sex. I have never, neither here or on any other site, seen people write complaints about the fact that the amount of sex is significantly reduced in later parts of the story, even absent in some.

Having said all that, i would completely understand if you would not want to do something like this. It is, of course, your story and if you don't feel it should be altered, then simply don't.

dndw

If it ever becomes available at anything resembling reasonable cost(say under $40 or so)especially if both CAMP & Sibling are printed together post something here & I will be Very happy to buy a copy.

I aint a cop or religious freak or wanting to buy it for anything but my own enjoyment.

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Quite excellent. I am glad I found the rest of this story after reading Part 1 thru IV at another site. Great job!!!

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Steen3 wrote:

Hah. Oh wow, what an oversight, how on earth did I possibly miss that .

You are definitely one of, if not my favorite erotic authors. It is, in my mind a very close tie between yourself, and "Asexual Pseudonym" from XNXX, author of the novels 'Nascent' and 'Beauty'.

It truly is a shame that books of this kind are so unlikely to find publishers, and I would have certainly purchased myself a copy long ago.

Thanks again,

S.

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Does anybody have copies of these stories - they don't seem to be on XNXX anymore.

Thanks

Tony

Just to let you know, you have already caused me to lose several hours.  I am hooked on the story and can't wait for the next chapter.  Great job writing.  Well thought out organization etc.  (so far at least)

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