Repay the Favor

A sexy, slow burn between two siblings in 11 chapters.

Loving it so far. More soon please.

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OMG... so hot!  I read it way too fast though ;(   Looking forward to the next chapter.

(posted from 4: Math Problems)

Thanks all! I've been working on this for a while and was never quite sure if it was ready to share, but a little bit of feedback goes a long way.

I'm giving the remaining chapters a final edit, and one by one, I will post them as I get to them.

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junohatbox wrote:

Thanks all! I've been working on this for a while and was never quite sure if it was ready to share, but a little bit of feedback goes a long way.

I'm giving the remaining chapters a final edit, and one by one, I will post them as I get to them.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Glad to hear it! I'm enjoying and have been watching for the next installment for the last couple days. I like that it's from the girls' perspective and that it is advancing so gradually at the pace it is. Very hot!

I love it.. well written and keeps the surprises coming.

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Another very sexy recount of teenage lust..  I love it, the right mix of innocence and being carried away by raw hormones.  Well done!

(posted from 8: The Sleepover)

Great story so far. I hope there are many more chapters.

(posted from 8: The Sleepover)

SO Hot Hot HOT!

(posted from 10: Hot Seat)

Great Story so far. Keep it up. you’re certainly keeping me up!

(posted from 10: Hot Seat)

Damn, I really enjoyed the story.  As good of writing as I expect here or more so.  Thank you for posting it.

(posted from 11: Finale)

Chuckhelius wrote:

Damn, I really enjoyed the story.  As good of writing as I expect here or more so.  Thank you for posting it.

(posted from 11: Finale)

Thank you for reading! I've never written fiction of this length. It took a lot more time than expected and I learned a lot from the process, so I'm glad I was finally ready to share it.

Please think about further adventures for these 3 characters. Multiple stories could be told, more erotic than the next.

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Dadrepus wrote:

Please think about further adventures for these 3 characters. Multiple stories could be told, more erotic than the next.

(posted from 11: Finale)

I'm happy you liked it, and I definitely left some loose ends that could lead to further explorations.

A small window into my process: this was a project that I actually started during the early part of the COVID pandemic (when I had a lot more free time) and was gradually written and refined over the subsequent years until now.

With this one now wrapped, I don't currently have anything in the works. I don't think I'm done writing, but it may take some time before the next adventure.

Nice and hot! The nerves and emotions come through vividly. Really tees this story up for some future fun.

(posted from 3. Photographs)

Love to see some risky, public play. That’s one lucky brother!

(posted from 6: Pique)

I love how you set up the possible risks and how the narrator acknowledges how reckless they’re being. The payoff of the close call is very erotic.

(posted from 4: Math Problems)