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#1 2018-03-26 00:13:48

Bridget
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Registered: 2006-09-09
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Let it Snow

Let it Snow

Two women and their daughters meet at an Anime convention. Because Of a snow storm they are forced to spend the night together.


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#2 2018-03-26 13:00:03

bistander
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Registered: 2015-09-03
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Re: Let it Snow

Admin wrote:

Let it Snow

Two and their daughters meet at an Anime convention. Because Of a snow storm they are forced to spend the night together.

I must have already fallen asleep when I wrote that description. It should have read:

Two woman and their daughters meet at an Anime convention. Because Of a snow storm they are forced to spend the night together.

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#3 2018-03-26 17:37:21

Eric Storm
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Re: Let it Snow

Post corrected.  Even corrected from your correction, since "woman" isn't plural.

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#4 2018-03-27 02:18:12

bistander
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Re: Let it Snow

Thank you, Eric, and to everyone else, that is why I ask for people to proofread. I'm not drunk, but I play a drunk person on TV.

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#5 2018-03-31 00:09:06

Rescue25
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Re: Let it Snow

Very hot.

(posted from Chapter 1)

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#6 2023-08-03 23:26:29

Harddreams
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Re: Let it Snow

Another fantastic story I love your style of writing especially when you create a doubt of something happening, but then it happens

(posted from Chapter 1)

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