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#26 2017-05-19 16:45:14
- Jack Tempest
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Re: Archon: Archons Journey - The Beginning
I myself, am Far from being the most skilled on this planet at proofing through for grammatical and spelling errors, however, if it is, i shall gladly offer myself available to help out where i can.
regards, Jack Tempest
(and that simple is how it might potentially be done 
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#27 2017-06-01 00:18:13
- Wicked Storm
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- From: New Orleans
- Registered: 2012-06-15
- Posts: 368
Re: Archon: Archons Journey - The Beginning
Ahh, this is a completed book in the series lol, Archon 2 is underway, but sadly i bite off a lot of stuff, so I have a few stories all being written at the same time because i have so many idea's running around it's not even funny. then of course you get into the editing phase of things, and your like, i don't know where i want to spend my energy creating or honing. None the less I will never be giving up on Archon, just might be a while before i post more on it. As to proofing and editing, if people are interested use the send email feature on the forum and i will talk to you there.
In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.
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#28 2017-12-11 20:30:58
- Opthimus
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Re: Archon: Archons Journey - The Beginning
One of the best erotic novels I have ever read! Keep em coming plz!
(posted from Chapter 7 - A coming of Age)
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#29 2020-10-01 19:37:52
- kojak1818
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Re: Archon: Archons Journey - The Beginning
Leaving such a ridiculous waste of space between paragraphs I find quite annoying. It breaks the continuity and smooth flow of the story.
(posted from Chapter 6 - A Party to remember)
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#30 2020-10-01 20:13:44
- Eric Storm
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Re: Archon: Archons Journey - The Beginning
kojak1818 wrote:
Leaving such a ridiculous waste of space between paragraphs I find quite annoying. It breaks the continuity and smooth flow of the story.
(posted from Chapter 6 - A Party to remember)
This is your final warning, Kojak.
Eric Storm
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#31 2024-03-17 14:23:21
- Wicked Storm
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- From: New Orleans
- Registered: 2012-06-15
- Posts: 368
Re: Archon: Archons Journey - The Beginning
This novel is going through a re-write. So formatting and other issues should be resolved through that.
In the dark your lips taste like sweet nectar, and in the line they tease me endlessly.
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