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#1 2024-04-14 23:41:57
Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
Military officer retires and gets his dream, a pair of tiny nymphomaniacs.
CAUTION - Includes oral sex, anal sex, smoking, little girls with underarm and pubic hair, diaper/toilet play, and sex at very young ages. Some codes / activities are in later chapters.
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#2 2024-07-09 18:37:37
- Smkydesire
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
This is a fantastic read that could go so many different directions. I do hope that you would continue this work!!
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#3 2024-07-13 21:50:44
- Dadrepus
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
Interesting start.
(posted from Chapter 1)
Always willing to help. May not be good at it ;-)
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#4 2024-08-01 02:18:50
- CreepyUnclePete
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
This story is pretty extreme, even for me. I just added chapter two. I am focusing on other stories when I get time to write, but may add more eventually.
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#5 2024-10-05 18:34:15
- Sam Spayed
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
This is a very promising start. I've got a few with this sort of setting myself but nothing publishable yet. I might have put in more characterisation for the girls but I dare say that's coming once you get Sheila out of the way. One of my faults is too much realism, not enough sex. I don't see you making that mistakes here.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#6 2024-10-17 03:46:03
- Baldobomb
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
Very promising premise! Looking forward to more!!!
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#7 2024-12-02 12:05:05
- Sam Spayed
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
This is a delightfully perverted tale.
The children's language development seems to be rather delayed. That is probably realistic in the circumstances. However, language is one of few ongoing ways that the age of the children can be conveyed. Also there is little description of undressing or physical looks. I'm not getting a clear and consistent picture.
I'll certainly read more though.
(posted from Chapter 2)
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#8 2024-12-16 13:31:47
- JustLucky
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Re: Smoky Slut Sally and Hairy Horny Hannah
Different but not implausible.
Looking forward to where this goes :-)
(posted from Chapter 2)
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