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Cabal
Mark Cabal is on a mission to save his eleven-year-old daughter Heather's life, having exhausted all normal means at his disposal, desperate he turns to a mysterious stranger for aid, but what will it cost him?
This story will contain elements of Magic, MC, Inc, MF, Mf, Mg, and various combinations.
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This is a new story in the Cabal Universe. we fallow the misadventures of Trevor Baxter after he encountered a mysterious entity known as 'Z'.
i'm not sure what all store codes will be involved yet, because this is new and just sort of writing as I go, will definitely include MC, M-DOM, MF, Mg, MFg, Cheating, Inc, and a few others.
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Love it...
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some fantasy
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Very well written looking forward to the next chapters.
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I really like the pores this storyline has to make it as long as you want to. You are a gifted writer. Please keep them coming
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More please!
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After a long pause, I have just re-posted Chapters 1 and 2 of Bliss after a bit of a re-write to fix some issues and improve what I wrote way back when.
I have also added a new Chapter. #3 Sleepover.
I am going to return my Attention to the Main Story Cabal now. but I will be back with more Bliss after I get a few more chapters of Cabal out.
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Well, isn’t this a twist. Melding the two stories in a very clever way. Can’t wait for more. Just a few spelling errors, not much to speak of. I’m sure if you reread it you’ll see them.
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Dadrepus wrote:
Well, isn’t this a twist. Melding the two stories in a very clever way. Can’t wait for more. Just a few spelling errors, not much to speak of. I’m sure if you reread it you’ll see them.
(posted from Not An Action Hero)
Dadrepus, thank you so much. I really apricate the feedback.
This one was a lot of fun to write, and challenging, because it's mostly story. The sex scenes almost write themselves, but the action sequences were a challenge. I think I rewrote it two or three times before I was happy with it.
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Love both of your stories. Keep up the good work.
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Dadrepus wrote:
Love both of your stories. Keep up the good work.
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Thanks Dadrepus.. Every bit of feedback helps. And motivates me to write more.. so Thank you.
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