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#1 2018-09-19 02:04:45

Bridget
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Cabal

Cabal

Mark Cabal is on a mission to save his eleven-year-old daughter Heather's life,  having exhausted all normal means at his disposal, desperate he turns to a mysterious stranger for aid, but what will it cost him?

This story will contain elements of Magic, MC, Inc, MF, Mf, Mg, and various combinations.


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#2 2018-10-15 20:12:37

abaddon.pale
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Re: Cabal

This is a new story in the Cabal Universe.  we fallow the misadventures of Trevor Baxter after he encountered a mysterious entity known as 'Z'.

i'm not sure what all store codes will be involved yet, because this is new and just sort of writing as I go, will definitely include MC, M-DOM, MF, Mg, MFg, Cheating, Inc, and a few others.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

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#3 2019-01-24 05:47:14

James Marcus
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Re: Cabal

Love it...

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#4 2020-05-07 13:03:15

edjueinnest
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Re: Cabal

some fantasy

(posted from Shrapnel)

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#5 2020-06-16 06:31:26

Billybob1969
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Re: Cabal

Very well written looking forward to the next chapters.

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#6 2021-05-02 02:57:45

Fred73
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Re: Cabal

I really like the pores this storyline has to make it as long as you want to. You are a gifted writer. Please keep them coming

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#7 2023-01-26 00:26:08

Dadrepus
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Re: Cabal

More please!

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#8 2024-01-14 04:50:43

abaddon.pale
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Re: Cabal

After a long pause, I have just re-posted Chapters 1 and 2 of Bliss after a bit of a re-write to fix some issues and improve what I wrote way back when.

I have also added a new Chapter.  #3 Sleepover.

I am going to return my Attention to the Main Story Cabal now. but I will be back with more Bliss after I get a few more chapters of Cabal out.

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#9 2024-04-02 02:14:58

Dadrepus
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Re: Cabal

Well, isn’t this a twist. Melding the two stories in a very clever way. Can’t wait for more. Just a few spelling errors, not much to speak of. I’m sure if you reread it you’ll see them.

(posted from Not An Action Hero)


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#10 2024-04-02 03:17:07

abaddon.pale
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Re: Cabal

Dadrepus wrote:

Well, isn’t this a twist. Melding the two stories in a very clever way. Can’t wait for more. Just a few spelling errors, not much to speak of. I’m sure if you reread it you’ll see them.

(posted from Not An Action Hero)

Dadrepus, thank you so much.  I really apricate the feedback.

This one was a lot of fun to write, and challenging, because it's mostly story. The sex scenes almost write themselves, but the action sequences were a challenge.  I think I rewrote it two or three times before I was happy with it.

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#11 2024-07-13 10:00:31

Dadrepus
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Re: Cabal

Love both of your stories. Keep up the good work.

(posted from Housebreaking)


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#12 2024-07-24 15:58:00

abaddon.pale
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Re: Cabal

Dadrepus wrote:

Love both of your stories. Keep up the good work.

(posted from Housebreaking)

Thanks Dadrepus..  Every bit of feedback helps.   And motivates me to write more.. so Thank you.

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