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#1 2023-02-06 09:06:01

Bridget
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Billionaire Babe Buys a Boy

Billionaire Babe Buys a Boy

In the words of main character Allen, "I had been fostered before when I was eight, by a gay couple. They loved me far too much. No, not in a weird child-sex pervert kind of way, they were ridiculously overprotective. I couldn’t stand the absurd coddling and demanded they bring me back to the orphanage. A little after I turned 12 my next family loved me just as much, and in a child-sex pervert kind of way. I had never imagined I could be so happy!"


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#2 2024-07-30 15:12:27

Dadrepus
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Registered: 2023-01-11
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Re: Billionaire Babe Buys a Boy

Good start. Your fascination with cigarette smoking is a little off putting but you do you!

(posted from Chapter 1)


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#3 2024-08-01 02:14:26

CreepyUnclePete
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Re: Billionaire Babe Buys a Boy

I understand most people are turned off by it, but young girls smoking is my main kink / fetish. Back in ancient times, when I was ten or eleven, (1970) my babysitter was a gorgeous fifteen-year-old smoker. Once I accidentally walked in on her in the bathroom. She was peeing and sucking on a cigarette.

I did what came naturally, and immediately ran to my bed. Puberty hit me like an avalanche! I didn't just have my first orgasm that night, I had my first five or six! Solo, sadly.

But like you said, you do you. I'm glad you enjoy at least portions of my stories.

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#4 2024-08-08 14:27:34

abaddon.pale
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Registered: 2018-09-11
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Re: Billionaire Babe Buys a Boy

Good start,

I felt sorry for the girls immediately. One constructive criticism I could offer is that Gator seems to both adapt immediately to being their master and also reluctant/resistant to it.

The one thing I found odd was that Gatter did not give the girls ( at least temporarily ) more normal names.  He could always switch them back later as a punishment.

Additionally, you could have reinforced that he noticed how distressed the girls were when they were not “Mastered” to give him more of a reason to dominate them.

(posted from Chapter 1)

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