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#1 2024-08-29 18:25:20

Bridget
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Deep End, The

The Deep End

Two parents hold monthly orgies. Then one night their six year-old daughter gets curious.
I would classify this as a cute coming of age story but it is explicit. Sexual relations are mentioned but not described in detail. There is no intercourse under 16 but a child is exposed to it.


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#2 2025-06-26 19:23:38

abaddon.pale
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Registered: 2018-09-11
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Re: Deep End, The

Interesting if short story.
may be a few spelling errors, desert vs dessert etc.

it's a bit to short to make any sort of emotional connection with the characters. And the sex scenes are are not super graphic.

All in all, it's more food for your own fantasy as a reader, than a lurid account.

Not bad Sam.. you never disapoint

(posted from Deep End, The)

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