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#1 2022-07-30 02:44:41
Precious Purchase
Precious Purchase
An American in Southeast Asia pays for a weekend with a little Asian prostitute and her even smaller virgin daughter. More chapters will follow if enough people like the idea. All characters 18 or older.
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#2 2022-08-07 15:55:39
- Mikenc67
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- From: North Carolina, USA
- Registered: 2022-05-26
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Re: Precious Purchase
PLEASE! At least give us Chapter 2. I adore Asian gals.
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#3 2022-08-13 05:17:53
- Limnophile
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- Registered: 2022-07-04
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Re: Precious Purchase
It's nice to hear you enjoyed the story. I posted a new version earlier today with the hookers being sisters instead of mom/daughter, due to legal silliness in my area. I hope you like it.
I'm in the middle of editing around 30 stories to 'up-age' them, so I don't get in trouble. I also have a full-time job and a family. Unfortunately, I doubt I will have time to write many new chapters or short stories until the holiday season, possibly early next year. I plan for 'Precious Purchase' to last at least 10 chapters, I just need to find the time.
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#4 2024-10-21 17:12:44
- abaddon.pale
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- Registered: 2018-09-11
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Re: Precious Purchase
Limnophile,
Nice start.. I also like stories involving Asian girls. And look forward to the next chapter.
++constructive feedback++
would be nice to get a little more back story on the Narrator, What sort of work was he doing. Maybe some indication of why he has not had an opportunity or inclination to sample the local goods until now.
I like that Azizi has an English Accent. Really makes me curious as to her back story. That and why her English is better than her sisters.
Cheers!
Abaddon.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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