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#1 2025-03-30 01:41:37
Cindy
Cindy
Dan’s an engineer living in an RV park during a construction project. Cindy is thirteen, living with her trashy mom in the same park. Dan knows his job. He knows his life. He doesn't know how Cindy will be part of it.
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#2 2025-03-30 14:41:58
- Dadrepus
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Re: Cindy
I get a light blue background when I click the top link to read this in a separate window, on purpose? Story good.
(posted from Chapter 3)
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#3 2025-03-30 16:28:45
- Dadrepus
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Re: Cindy
Great start, glad to see you post here. Hope you get a lot of positive feedback.
(posted from Chapter 6)
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#4 2025-03-30 19:13:32
- Eric Storm
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Re: Cindy
Dadrepus wrote:
I get a light blue background when I click the top link to read this in a separate window, on purpose? Story good.
Is this still happening to you? Because I looked, and can't find a cause.
Eric Storm
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#5 2025-04-02 13:11:55
- bigro
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- Registered: 2021-11-17
- Posts: 12
Re: Cindy
Very enjoyable read. Good story line.
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#6 2025-04-02 15:34:47
- crypticbyte
- Tipsy
- Registered: 2020-04-23
- Posts: 9
Re: Cindy
I really like how the story is written so far (on chapter 3 right now). Thanks for writing and posting it!
Eric Storm wrote:
Dadrepus wrote:
I get a light blue background when I click the top link to read this in a separate window, on purpose? Story good.
Is this still happening to you? Because I looked, and can't find a cause.
Eric Storm
I'm getting the same issue, the body tag has
Code:
bgcolor="#aaddff"
set.
Im on Safari on macOS 15.3.2 right now.
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#7 2025-04-03 08:49:19
- sadimlonely
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Re: Cindy
This was a lot of fun.
The transition from buddies to lovers, I thought, was a little too abrupt - it stretched belief too far, too fast - but the blossoming romance? I thought that was handled really well.
(posted from Chapter 9)
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#8 2025-04-06 22:38:09
- Oyster50
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Re: Cindy
sadimlonely wrote:
This was a lot of fun.
The transition from buddies to lovers, I thought, was a little too abrupt - it stretched belief too far, too fast - but the blossoming romance? I thought that was handled really well.
(posted from Chapter 9)
This was the first story I wrote for publishing. Be gentle. I like to think I improved since then.
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#9 2025-05-16 17:25:04
- Lacyann
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- From: Colorado
- Registered: 2020-03-31
- Posts: 21
Re: Cindy
I really enjoyed reading this story
Last edited by Lacyann (2025-08-26 18:39:30)
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