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please finish

(posted from Chapter 38: How)

Awesome!!!

(posted from Potential Chapter 33: Photograph)

This is an amazing story! I'm just checking in, how are you doing? I'm anxious to see the next chapter. I hope all is well.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Thanks for checking in. I'm doing okay, and making some progress on making sure that evil fucker gets what's coming to him. I was stupidly hung up for months trying to move forward. It turns out that a scene I have had in mind for years needed to be killed to move past that part of the story. It's hard to kill your babies, so I tried and tried to make it work when it just didn't.

I'll keep going without it now. Maybe one day, I'll publish all the scenes that didn't make it into the story.

It’s getting super tense. Awesome writing skills. Please finish the story.

(posted from Chapter 41: If We Help Each Other)

I sure hope you get chapter 43 posted soon. All I can think about is John getting his just rewards and Evan finally getting to be with someone the way everyone else does. I mean Deanne has Rebecca Candy has Cindy Gloria has Darlene. Yes he has allot of good sex but I feel so sorry he has no one to cozy up to like the rest.

(posted from the Item Information Page)

Well, now I know why this story has never finished here! Bistander has moved all hist stories to Storiesonline and bookapay to make money from his work. He has published the final chapter on Bookapay if anyone is interested. I am not! If he would have been honest about this I probably would have supported him.

(posted from Chapter 42: Its okay, baby, I got you)

Last edited by Dadrepus (2025-03-06 17:50:47)

Justheretoread wrote:

Judge much? Everyone need to make money, and it's totally a marketable story, I've read it 5+ times, and have loved it Every. Single, Time. And just and FYI, the version on Readaby is at the same exact place this version is. Confirm your facts before lashing out.
Mr Potential, keep up the good work, I very much look forward to the conclusion on this story. Cheers

(posted from the Item Information Page)

If that is true, I apologize for my rash comments. I did not check to see that the stories are at the same place. I just saw more and more postings there and nothing here. If he has not abandoned this site, I for one, am very glad as I do like his writing.

If only Eric could establish a way the Authors here could link to a PayPal account for "donations".

I've intentionally avoided stopping in here to see the comments because it's embarrassing to say, again, that I am still not done with chapter 43.
Please don't think it's because I don't care about you, or have given up. I haven't. I'm doing what needs to be done to keep the lights on, and that doesn't mean working to sell more books on Bookapy. If that were the case, I'd have this finished because the people over there are also waiting for the ending. I'm doing other things that require a lot of time and mental energy in the mornings.

As for the comment above, no worries. I actually have nothing to do with the Bookapy project. Once all the proofreading and editing were done last year, I turned it over to someone who gets 20% of sales to make it an ebook and get it on the site, which takes 13%
I didn't even know about stories online until recently. That site is owned by the bookapy guy, and he requires authors to post their stories there, too. That way, he makes money off of subscriptions and book sales, and it's used to promote the books on Bookapy. If I had it to do again, I wouldn't have done it. The amount of time and effort I had to put in wasn't worth the money I made.

I'm trying to get this project done, but so far I only have 3,000 words of chapter 43 written.

When I finish, I'll be proud of it, I think, but right now I hate Potential. I has taken 7 years of my life.