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#1 2025-08-19 13:04:29
Ice Cream Ike
Ice Cream Ike
Sometimes you get lucky, and stumble into the perfect job. That's what happened to Ike when he started driving an ice cream truck. That white vehicle seemed to draw nymphets like bees to a blossom.
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#2 2025-08-20 08:44:39
- JustLucky
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Re: Ice Cream Ike
Well that was a surprisingly good read!
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#3 2025-08-21 13:09:23
- abaddon.pale
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Re: Ice Cream Ike
Not a bad first chapter. There is not a lot of conflict in the story internal or external but the scenes are hot. It's more Mf than Mg though. Perhaps you are planning for Mg in later chapters. Constructive Feedback: you could put more visual description into the story to make it feel more "lived in" describe the environment, sights, sounds, smells etc.
(posted from Chapter 1)
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#4 2025-08-21 22:32:26
- Eric Storm
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Re: Ice Cream Ike
Not having read the story, I just want to clarify, in case there is confusion: "f" versus "g" is based entirely on the physical age of the female. "f" is a girl from 13-17 years of age (inclusive). "g" is anyone age 12 or younger. Again, I haven't read this story, so I don't know which tag applies, I'm just making sure the terms are understood.
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