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#1 2023-02-10 06:23:51
Best Deal Ever
Best Deal Ever
A beautiful but poor widow needs a home and financial security for her daughters. A wealthy and powerful man wants a willing wife and some teen girls he can seduce. They make the Best Deal Ever.
Starts a bit slow. Skip to chapter 3 if you only want stroke material.
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#2 2026-06-30 17:08:13
- abaddon.pale
- Wasted
- Registered: 2018-09-11
- Posts: 127
Re: Best Deal Ever
** OK good call.. Yea I like the story idea, the concept is one of my kinks ( story wise. )
So far really enjoying the story and the characters. 1 note.. when MC and Darlene are talking it is not brought up... what if she agrees but one of the girls never wants to have sex with him or even flat our refuses. While yes it's a story and yes its your story so obviously they are all going to be into it, hopefully sooner than later. But I would think Darlene and or MC would think about that and have a discussion about it.
(posted from Chapter 2)
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#3 2026-07-01 01:10:53
- abaddon.pale
- Wasted
- Registered: 2018-09-11
- Posts: 127
Re: Best Deal Ever
first complaint on this story... his first time with Jessi got barely 1 paragraph. That deserved at least half a page.
(posted from Chapter 4)
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