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A morbidly obese man, a killer virus and the female bioengineer he turns to.
Please read and comment.
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good but the chaps are too short
(posted from Chapter 2)
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Since this story was originally only the first chapter, which is more of a drabble than anything else and the second section wasn't ever supposed to exist... fair enough. It's not going to make me change anything, but I suppose it's a valid thing to say. Thanks for bothering.
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Does anybody care at all about this? Because I wrote another short chapter-like thing and I could post it, but I'm not going to go to the trouble of fixing a few minor things and converting it if nobody cares about reading more.
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Black Rose wrote:
Does anybody care at all about this?
YES!! I thought this was the best of your writing, and the story itself had a great deal of potential. I definitely want to see more. The only reason I didn't comment was that I read it before I got on the forums.
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Please please pleeeeease post it. It has been too long since I've had my Black Rose fix!
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Storymaster69 wrote:
It has been too long since I've had my Black Rose fix!
You should have gotten the extended warranty.
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I will warn you in advance that this part's rough. I couldn't be bothered to fix anything in this part yet, you see. Come on... cheer me up or something, will you?
(posted from Chapter 3)
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I like it Black Rose. It has the potential to be a great story. I love your way with words as well.
(posted from Chapter 3)
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Hey BR. I just re-read chapter 1 and for the first time chapters 2 and 3 and I am still loving this story. This story has lots of potential and I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
Keep up the good work
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just read your story and thought it was good, i'm not verry good at giving comments, witch means that i really have to like it before i post.
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hey we need more plllllzzzzz its shaping up to be a very good storie and i wanna read moooooore
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ignore my whining im posting this at 4am and im starting to get groggy later
mooooooooore
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Great Story and I hope you write more.
(posted from Chapter 3)
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lousy place to dump this f*****g story. You were just getting started.
(posted from Chapter 3)
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