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#1 2009-05-06 08:24:44
Rowan Tree redux
Greetings
Just a quick note, the story stub "Rowan Tree" has been completely revised and is now three chapters long.
Stlll deciding its future but felt good to write again for a change.
Let me know what you think
If this goes well then some past stories actually have a shot at completion 
"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946
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#2 2009-05-07 04:22:36
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Re: Rowan Tree redux
How am I supposed to read it if you don't post it?
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#3 2009-05-07 05:41:53
Re: Rowan Tree redux
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The message should have said: the old crappy "Rowan Tree" has been completely replaced with the new improved story cleverly using the same old name by using the edit function...
So go read the new improved "Rowan Tree" in my stories
"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946
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#4 2009-05-11 05:52:39
- Neitherspace
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Re: Rowan Tree redux
um war Im looking at your page right now and its not there...i mean AT ALL
*edit* um by at all i mean on here I did find your blog where its posted
http://warlordsstories.blogspot.com/?zx … f2b9edb8e5
also found your twitter oddly that came up first *shrugs*
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#5 2009-05-11 07:58:13
Re: Rowan Tree redux
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Well I'm not doing a very sterling job of communicating here, its not in the story section but Rowan Tree is posted on the forum page http://www.wolfpub.org/forum/viewforum.php?id=24
And on my BLOG page http://warlordsstories.blogspot.com/200 … redux.html
But its not far enough along to be posted as an actual story..
we shall see
"A scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions, thus: 1. What am I trying to say? 2. What words will express it? 3. What image or idiom will make it clearer? 4. Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?" - George Orwell, Politics and the English Language, 1946
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#6 2009-05-12 03:13:32
- Neitherspace
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Re: Rowan Tree redux
not for nothing war but that IS what the pre-release section is for...or am i wrong about that Eric
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#7 2009-05-12 03:22:21
Re: Rowan Tree redux
Neitherspace wrote:
not for nothing war but that IS what the pre-release section is for...or am i wrong about that Eric
Greetings
At the time I posted the first version, "pre-release" was not around so I just replaced that one with the new version in my forum section, nada mas..
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#8 2009-05-12 05:36:35
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Re: Rowan Tree redux
Neitherspace:
Briefly: No, not really. But Warlord could have simply posted it in his section, and called it a work in progress.
Eric.
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