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Thank you, Timotheos. I'm working on the next chapter now, and I hope to have it done before too much longer. I hope my future efforts will prove as enjoyable.
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Sorry didn't do feedback on each chapter. Had to read the whole thing at one sitting. The story pulled me in and kept going. Chapter 1 reminded me of my sophmore year in high school when I put one of the jocks in the hospital with a ruptured spleen, from about 20 gut shots with both fists in less than a minute. I was only 5'1" 140lbs. Please keep it rolling!
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I'm happy that you're enjoying TTGB. I hope I won't keep you waiting too long on the next chapter.
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nice story, and i really don't like it when people tell the writer to work faster, but I must say I was tempted to. instead I well settle for asking if i should wait expectantly, aka check every day, or just wait normally.
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I am a new fan. This is simply awesome. For what little you've given us it is enough to make us wanna come back for more. Thanks for the joys I got from reading your writings. Looking forward to more.
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Great Story, and very interesting ideas
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I like this story so far, and I hope you find the time to continue it.
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Love this story!
i really hope you continue this one, it is too good to be without an end
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I don't know how I missed reading this before.
Excellent story with enough scope to grow into ongoing series.
Sad to see it has stopped prematurely.
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Hi all.
I hope the author is still around. Been a long time since updates
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The last I heard, this author - who used to be a close friend of mine - is no longer on the Internet. (How he survives that way is beyond me.) I have not actually spoken to him in at least 15 years or more. I actually met him face-to-face once, but have since completely lost touch.
All this is to say, no, the author is no longer around.
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Another pretty decent story that doesn't finish. Has anyone found any more of this anywhere else?
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Corvis is no longer on the Internet, and hasn't been for a VERY long time.
Eric Storm
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